Yes continue writing this story I like it a lot

Firstly write however you wish to write you are the author though disregarding criticism all together is generally a bad idea as long as it is not all toxic. I believe the thing that makes those people unsatisfied is that according to the story Mc is a guy who is incredibly handsome, attractive and charming he also doesn’t care about being faithful in a relationship or has rule about being in love with a person before sleeping with them a person who has his qualifications realistically should have Allready have slept with one multiple people at this point in story. I personally don’t enjoy Lemons and skip through them so I like the way story goes but it is understandable why some people would be bothered.

I just finished reading through all the chapters there are currently. I believe this is one of storys with highest level quality on WebNovel. I would suggest it to everyone as a great read. It is well written and has characters with actual personalities. World building is also great. It is only downside is that there are sizable info dumps in some chapters though out of place and I like them myself it may not be everyone’s cup of tea but you can skip through so no harm no foul.

I just finished reading through all the chapters there are currently. I believe this is one of storys with highest level quality on WebNovel. Last chapters was great too.[img=recommend]

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+1 but close ones should be should not decided hastily and there should be an explanation to why they become important to him

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Nick Furry was very unlike himself there were a few problems with Tony too but they are acceptable in comparison.

No it wass explained that the human creation and Sarah was not involved or even attracted to each other during Naruto mission

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Continue

I would like to write magic games arc again.

How about going to a different realm that can be realm in dxd like Jötunheimr where frost giants live or Alfeimr where elfs live he can go on mission along with some valkry or hero from Norse pantheon or maybe get teleported there some how and try to get out he can get into a conflict with a giant king or dragon or elfs/dark elfs dwarfs learn rune magic while there and get them tattooed on his body for permanent enhancements he can even use slime body suit to constantly change those tattoos to get different powers maybe becoming a dragon slayer getting a power boost to his body it is cannon as we know from Siegfried and he could get an alliance wit Nordic gods in the end

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