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LoneDao8dReplied to Jack_PriperJianghu can refer to martial arts world too so it still applies to a low fantasy world
The setting sun dipped below the horizon, casting the last rays of dusk upon Southern Hills City. The city walls stood tall, covered in green moss at the corners, while citizens, merchants, and carriages queued to enter the gates. Inside, the streets were a spider's web of activity with inns, shops, and willow-lined alleys bustling with life. Children frolicked in the lanes, while hawkers shouted to sell their crafts on the street corners. Jianghu drifters drew crowds with their gong and drum performances, their feats of skill captivating the onlookers. Wisps of cooking smoke rose from households, blurring the twilight.- LoneDao11dCommented
Bro watched a few episodes of Naruto and there was no pulling him back
[Heaven tried to keep me down, but I defied it! Brown boring eyes? With this technique, I can change my eye color and become the mightiest eye model! Muhahahaha!] - LoneDao11dCommented
Lohp was fun at first but got repetitive fast, looking forward to where this goes and hope u don’t fall into the same pitfalls
[Congratulations! Unlocked Library of Heaven's Souls!] - LoneDao11dReplied to Javed_9399
The start of this novel blatantly plagiarizes Robbin Hobbs assassins apprentice. Frankly I don’t feel comfortable reading this due to that. I don’t know if later chapters will plagiarize from assassins apprentice or other novels but I’d rather not read this due to the fact it’s a real possibility considering everything from the grandfather dropping him off to character interactions within those first 8 chapters was beat for beat ripped off with very minor changes to fit the world setting.
- LoneDao12dPosted
The start of this novel blatantly plagiarizes Robbin Hobbs assassins apprentice. Frankly I don’t feel comfortable reading this due to that. I don’t know if later chapters will plagiarize from assassins apprentice or other novels but I’d rather not read this due to the fact it’s a real possibility considering everything from the grandfather dropping him off to character interactions within those first 8 chapters was beat for beat ripped off with very minor changes to fit the world setting.
- LoneDao12dCommented
I’m sorry this is blatant plagiarism man, u just changed some minor details to match ur cultivation world. The guy with the limp, the grabbing his chin and staring at his face. Taking him to the barn. The line about the dragons is the same line but it was hawks. All the character interactions in this chapter were ripped off from assassins apprentice.
Ch 7 Had Enough to Eat? - LoneDao12dCommentedCh 6 Your Responsibility Now
- LoneDao12dCommentedCh 5 Whose Child?
- LoneDao19dCommented
I thought at the peak of their worlds cycle they were at the top of the universe, does that mean nobody in their universe had actually reached the limit of it cultivation realms yet?
"When the latest apocalypse descended, I was imbued with all their powers as they bid their final goodbyes. Their power allowed me to ascend beyond the Half-Celestial realm and become a Greater Celestial, which is more than 3 major realms higher and near the very peak of power achievable in our universe." - LoneDao20dCommented
Rouge system alert, multiverse system apocalypse imminent. Defiance of the fall world like a word with u.
[Objective: Attract players from Terra and solidify the connection to it, providing grounds for the system's invasion and eventual takeover!] - LoneDao20dCommented
So close lol
[However, player Dalvin is too weak! As such, the system deems it best to make him a puppet leader while the system controls its own functions freely!] - LoneDao23dCommented
Are we gonna see an enemy becomes an ally trope here, that could be interesting
As Jean materialized back in the college, he remained composed, his mind focused on the task at hand. With a determined stance, he whispered to himself, "But I love my future more." - LoneDao23dCommented
Curious how many destroyed paths we have here, 1 for each academy or more?
His emotions were a mess, as he suspected this world's magus to regulate everything from the shadows. Since Elena lived for centuries, it wasn't too unrealistic to expect he could live much longer. Especially if he was really destroying paths and plundering their knowledge. - LoneDao23dCommented
Doesn’t that mean the current archmages are in on it
Adam's eyes narrowed. Between Kwame's and Elena's warnings, he was now sure the academy's magic path was flawed. Worse, it was made this way purposefully. After all, the common point between the two archmages was their absence of affinity and talent! - LoneDao23dCommented
Bros building a body lol
'What am I supposed to do with those materials?' He asked himself with a deep frown. After all, it was already his third mythical ingredient. Should he try to ask someone to craft items for him? But to what end? If they weren't soul-bound, they would be of little use... - LoneDao24dCommented
System creator, part of the person or group of people destroying paths?
Note: Soul is heavily damaged. Please progress using the proper paths... - LoneDao24dCommented
kind of surprised I don’t know what the system sources it’s knowledge from, but I assumed it was some kind of akashic records Type deal tied to the world The fact doesn’t recognize this Method at all Even though the person who created it never got to spread it and then died apparently, it’s still a little surprising, But i I think it still has knowledge of destroyed paths, considering his class.
[Error, Error, standard limit broken.] - LoneDao25dCommented
Bro really had an unclaimed destiny I guess? The unfulfilled prophecy of the arcane sovereign
[Tier 2 Mythic Boss: Gaston, The Uncrowned Arcane Sovereign, defeated. You have gained 4000 experience points.]