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darkblaze8dCommentedgrab it by the nuts and twist!!!
The thing charged at me, and in that moment of sheer terror, all I could do was shut my eyes and brace for the inevitable collision. What else is there to do when you're about to faceplant into something straight out of a nightmare?- darkblaze18dPosted
This story could have been amazing, if it wasn't for the atrocious translation and character development. You can definitely read it but in no way will you be able to immerse yourself into the story, with the way it is written. I would have loved for this to be edited and looked over, it could have been an amazing story if it was flushed out properly.
- darkblaze2mthCommented
wouldn't it be better to say, "protect the people of the heavenly Doa". Considering it isn't just humanity that Is apart of it!!
"There's no need to be so polite. I'll teach you the Dao today. I hope you can always remember this merit. From now on, it's your duty to protect the humans of the Immortal Dao." - darkblaze3mthCommented
it's always annoying when they get the numbers wrong like this.
Even though the heavenly might was powerful, Jiang Changsheng was not afraid. The last time he broke through, the strength was already at the peak of the Dao Martial Spirit Realm. He was probably not considered weak even in the Creation Martial Realm because his strength value in terms of incense points had exceeded 600 billion incense points. - darkblaze4mthCommented
I really hope he doesn't come back as an enemy
He turned to stare at me and I almost stumbled back in shock. His eyes were pools of black with webs of the same color covering his eyes. He had on his face a wide smile that reeked of evil. - darkblaze4mthCommented
I can honestly say this was the better end result for me.
"You have an idea on how to undo this clusterfuck...I know you do, because I'm thinking of the same thing. Use it, it's okay. If there's anyone else who has your back apart from White and I, it's Equity." - darkblaze4mthCommented
I dont know why but I'm starting to get lost?
"I don't have a lot of conditions for you you to be in my life Doc. Just trust me...that's all." - darkblaze4mthCommented
I have no clue where I am time wise, it will probably be explained later on but it takes me away from the story.
Self Sabotage part 1 - darkblaze4mthReplied to Dr_Jikan
desire
The Pairing is Starfire...MAYBE. shrug. But just like any true relationship out there, the romance will not be instantaneous. They will have their own share of problems. Trust, fear, hate, love, loyalty... - darkblaze5mthCommented
I thought he can bring people back to life? did I misunderstand something?
His internal organs had been smashed. If not for his high realm, even the Rejuvenation spell would not have been able to keep him alive. - darkblaze5mthCommented
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Were it not for the adrenaline Afton might've thrown up... He was literally covered in rotten blood, intestines and other organs from his victims. - darkblaze5mthCommented
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He wasn't going to do anything about it though, just his mere presence here could alert people to who was responsible. Plus, he didn't care all that much about the NCR citizens... Shaking his head, he continues to check himself, he still felt phantom pains of shrapnel tearing his body apart... - darkblaze5mthCommented
are you telling me, someone was able to get near him and even touch him without him noticing? that is the biggest load a dog poo I've ever read.
He tried to sit up but stopped when he felt something crinkle under his remaining hand... Picking it up and looking at it, he discovered a rather badly written note obviously meant for him. It read : - darkblaze5mthCommented
with maxed sneak, shouldn't he know how not to step on things??
Afton's boots weren't made to be quiet, but for some reason they made almost no noise, even when stepping on things. While not paying attention he'd accidentally stood on a large twig, causing it to snap... But even then it was quieter than one would expect. - darkblaze5mthCommented
so he doesn't care if he kills innocent people now?
All they needed to do was sneak over, unlock it and dump all the contents on the Legion's head... The reason they hadn't immediately jumped at the chance were many, the first being that this would undoubtedly kill any slaves held in the camp... Now, Afton wouldn't mind the casualties but Karl's daughter might be down there, not to mention it'd strike too close to home to do something like that. - darkblaze5mthCommented
you know I sometimes hate it whenever I come across the words 'eyes bulge',
The duo's eyes bulge at the soldiers, what'd happened between yesterday and now? They'd seem so antagonistic, but now they were offering a complete pardon? - darkblaze5mthCommented
why would you give a warning to someone who has done what they have done. that's quite literally idiotic.
Time froze and Afton took a moment to collect himself, his mind was racing and he was flustered about what to do. He'd thought that Karl would at least give a warning before he started shooting, but perhaps not... The scene they'd be presented with had clearly struck a nerve on the man. - darkblaze5mthCommented
what I dont get, is why is he not on high alert around them, when he has seen what they tried to do before. it's a bit lopsided.
Karl's .44 Magnum went off and struck Louis in the chest as he ran up and pistol-whipped Reggie in the face. His expression was almost scary, the rage he was displaying now almost had Afton take a step back, though, when he remembered that bullets would start flying he activated VATS. - darkblaze5mthCommented
does he not get stat points? or is the another way to gain them?
S.P.E.C.I.A.L : - darkblaze5mthCommented
what do you mean probably???!!!
Afton reluctantly helps set Tommy's nose, packing it with balled up bandages before fixing it in place with a makeshift splint. His nose would probably come out crooked, but he probably deserved it for what he was trying to do.