The story writing has become more and more incoherent...like I get the concept of creative writing. Expressions through showing rather then telling. However, this chapter was becoming increasingly difficult to read as it progressed. What even happened at the end? I don’t know and at this point I’m not sure I really care. The actual plot has barely progressed. What is evening happening? Where is this story going? Instead of being all artsy with the writing (and the grammer mistakes makes it harder to understand) can we have some coherent plot and dialogue...I really do love this story, in fact its the only story thats keeping me from deleting webnovel altogether. Therefore, don’t give up on this story as it really has so much potential. I am still looking forward to what happens in future.