lowenlyon
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Leyendo en inglés mientras que en español no hay nada *TT-TT
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lowenlyon2dCommentedI'm confused it's 6 the total or is 5 after the -1?
Dexterity: 6 (Stout. -1)- lowenlyon22dCommented
4y and no news i have to say gg
I did not forget about this story nor I dropped it. Currently, I'm writing my other story. Once, I'm done there, I will restart my work here. - lowenlyon1mthPosted
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there is a word that bug me off, every time you use he, his is a female when should be a male one, and you use her, she when is a male one when should be used in females
Tl: I actually wrote this novel in Indonesian language, but some of my readers wanted me to translate it into English,So I used Google Translate to translate this novel into English, so there may be some words that are not clear, but thank you all for your all input, bro. [My English needs a lot of improvement, I typed this alsousing Google Translate]. And please continue to comment on chapters that seem to have wrong words so I can improve them a little, Thanks bro😁 - lowenlyon1mthCommented
maybe it will be better to say " give me your life" or something like that
"Hey, kid, under Hidden Mist Jutsu, even if your strength is good, it is impossible to avoid my attack. Give me death!" He shouted out the last sentence, exhausting all his strength. A sword slashed out towards Hiro's side, and the violent wind hunted and snapped. - lowenlyon3mthCommented
lol
"Daddy… Let's not compare with this pervert! The immortal bird Marco couldn't help but say, "This guy is not right, really, such a powerful strength, absolutely wrong!" " - lowenlyon3mthCommented
sauron is a nakama
Luffy and Sanji, Sauron, Usopp and the others set sail again, leaving the town of Rogue and heading directly towards the Upside Down Mountain, where they also officially stepped into the great route.