Gus3000

It's a chapter that leaves you sad and happy at the same time, and that's because it hasn't even gotten to the worst arcs yet.

I don't know how to mark comments within paragraphs of text, so I'll leave the meme here; those who read the correct part will understand and make the connection.

This kid makes me proud, full of respect for how much he's grown in such a short time. This is how you write about character growth and development; I've seen so much poorly done work that it should be considered a war crime. Here we follow along and grow together (or at least it gives the feeling of participation), which is great.

It's fine to do that, as long as it doesn't go beyond three chapters, because this is probably the limit of readers' patience that the curiosity to focus on the main character and not on the parallel stories (even if important) can generate.

"You can't hear images" The image:

qual o nível é esse comum? mesmo que você não possa invocar um exoesqueleto, existem: Padded clothing, impact-resistant or Kevlar suits (bulletproof material, not to mention that there are bulletproof protections made with non-neutian liquid or ceramics), armor (not the bulky kind, (those that are worn close to the body, under clothing, with a chain or scale design). Provided it's a clothing concept, it would be possible to test the limits of the material it's made from, unless you're trying to make a garment out of vibranium; I think it's possible to write a chapter about testing the limits of ability and the expenditure of energy.

Unfortunately, I graduated in pedagogy (as a teacher). The good thing is that you learn a little bit of everything, the bad thing is that I live in Brazil and education receives little investment; here, corrupt politicians rule with an iron fist, taking advantage of ignorance of the population (Have you seen the controversial episode of the Dinosaurs family about mass control through TV?), The fact that the entire population receives quality education is not a good thing for them, so we have few vacancies ( I am unemployed). As for my culinary studies, I lacked the funds for the tuition fees; we don't have student loans here, nor job security (because the population is very large and the competition is fierce). And no matter how high my grades were on the national exam, without money I could only choose the second best from the list of free courses (they had to raise the passing grade for several courses because That year, many people got above-average grades. Sure, I like explaining things and I have a great affinity with children (I think autism helped a little). And because of my thirst for knowledge (addicted to reading), I have spent years developing my talents in text interpretation, public speaking, sociology, philosophy, psychology, and historical/cultural analysis (summarize all the complicated things to make them easier to understand, using jokes, games or references). So after the first semester of adaptation (which I did very badly) I practically did a speedrun to graduate (I also don't know how my thesis passed the review process; even I think I did it haphazardly, even though the content made sense), So I got along really well with pedagogy, but I don't regret not working in the field, because I know it's a lot of paperwork and I hate that.

I agree, I've always been very precocious since childhood, and I had a great thirst for knowledge. When I discovered that I had all five senses heightened, At first I was happy, like I had superpowers, but then I discovered that the food was starting to taste like wax, and I realized I was beginning to have symptoms of anorexia. So I dove headfirst into the world of cooking out of sheer hatred, to the point where I'd rather wait hours to eat (even though I have a fast metabolism) than eat poorly prepared food. But in return, I became one of the best cooks in my entire family, and I'm only 26 years old. My whole family is more or less gourmet, so the vast majority of the older members are also top-notch cooks. My only mistake to date has been the amount of salt, but each company has its own recipe for the ratio of salt to sodium. And since I'm not rich, I have to buy what's on sale, and until I get used to the new salt, the food will be more or less salty. Therefore, with the exception of luxury restaurants, I can guarantee that my food is impeccable.

To be honest, this skill isn't entirely useless; it's been proven that it's possible to use skills in many creative ways, so here are a few ideas: Could armor like that of Power Rangers/Super Sentai, Kamen Rider, and the Iron Man collection be considered ordinary clothing for the power level of Dragon Ball? Remember that Piccolo is a Namekian with all sorts of bizarre abilities and in theory could be considered a God. A weak God? You'd have to compare his power level to the rest of the multiverse, but here is OP.

So far the book is very good, you can see the growth of the main character. I'm not in a hurry for him to learn Armament Haki because the flames can temporarily fulfill that need, My priority is for him to learn Perception Haki before he discovers that, being a cat, he has multiple lives(Fruits are influenced by human imagination, so the history of cats having multiple lives is possible, since Yamata no Orochi managed). The easiest way to learn and develop Perception Haki is through survival instincts (Developing instincts or the five senses also helps, but survival instincts are faster, especially for Zoan-type or people with good combat skills). And finally... WHERE ARE THIS CAT'S CLAWS?