See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I like the story background, hope it will be one of the best webnovels I have ever read. Good luck.

Thank you for the good novel Still waiting for the update...

Thank you for the chapter Although the time of the story is mobing too fast, I still hope it will be a good story

thank you for the chapter

thank you for the chapter

Thank you for the chapter if you want a suggestion... about the length of the chapter which is short, but if you only write it during your free time, then just keep making it short but surely update a chapter every 1-3 days, to make sure that you are still continuing the story i like your writing style which is good, however i cannot give you any comment regarding the plot story because i seldom read short-chapter webnovel, either you will make it faster or slower pace in the story you can describe a bit about the environment the MC is living if you want to add more information in the story, which will not affect your plot of the story good luck

thank you for the chapter

Thank you for the chapter

Interesting idea with good title... will read till the next few chapters and hope you write a good story. Don't worry about the your writing style although there are few small mistakes (till chapter 1) but it is still good in my opinion as you can edit it later. Good luck and thank you.