kay111

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Honestly speaking I am happy with your story , everything you have built so far is amazing, but just the fmc sucks for me , I would rather there is no female mc and just remove romance all together but this is your vision and I will continue to read it in the next ordeal not this one , and I know you are think but you have explained why she’ actings like that but let me ask you a question in this great world you have built I am sure they are more interesting and other combinations you can try , why go down the romance routine when your world literally has the multiverse storyline

I see it now , it’s going the dragon ball route . Lots of dialogue and slow paced story but when the action starts it brings out the big guns

I am of the same mind with this … he wants the system out of the novel for as long as they can

I will drop it here , until like 6 months later .. I know that she’s the fmc but the one sided thing is remind of the reason I dropped , supreme magus , the story is great but there is always this forced side that the MC has to do … I will see you after this part of the arch is done

It was short , great but shorter than us ual