Me encanta la dirección del personaje y su desarrollo

the novel is great, a little rushed but it's good, but I'm about to leave it with so many ads you upload, it's annoying to get excited thinking that it's a chapter and it's just an ad.

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it depends on the monetary value but you should have about half the Malfoy fortune, but more items or property from your occupation as a potionist.

Please author sama I want to see Lyli's reaction to the new Severus.

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Thanks You for chapter

That the consequence is flexible and that it depends on each person, for example with tonks it can be something funny like a tattoo on the face that has to be removed red or uncontrollable laughter that has to be removed just like red or more simply deprivation of magic.

i like

but no more than 3 because then sometimes they don't even appear in the story and they forget about them, recommendation... support

cool chapter, harem tsunade, tsume and anko

survey 1-B survey 2-B if possible a meeting of tonks and Hermione as twins

I'm liking it, but why add an oc as a love interest if you send her away later and don't develop the character? It's better if the love interest is one of the girls in the series who already have a personality. greetings and encouragement.

Don't be discouraged, you have a good story you could refine it to make it more interesting but the comedy moments made me laugh out loud and that's why I keep reading it, remember that even the first harry potter book was rejected until it was accepted, so cheer up .

Me gusta la historia pero quisiera que tuviera algo de romance, ya que solo planes se me hace muy monotono, y así pero si me gustaría que se interesara en Mikoto y luego planteará para ayudarla solo a ella

Stiles's character is fine but I don't like that he cares a lot about scot, because as he said he was a good piece as an alpha and everything but if he has to be protecting him, then it doesn't make sense, if he's already going to get away from allison this fine, but not going to be helping scot at all times like in the series, always hated that, anyway great fanfic and interesting concept.

Necesito otro capítulo ya , me encanta como estás plasmando todo

Es una gran historia, i like You history más que nada por el desarrollo y como juegas con la trama. I like i like I like i like I like i like I like i like

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