This was one of the most idiotic and useless 5 chapters I have ever seen. Author what is the matter with you?!

An enjoyable read and the concept is good, but it has no direction every chapter is a standalone story and the MC is totally shadowed by the silly dramas of the original show, I just wish to see the side of the MC actually developing his gifts and balancing and blending the show with his original story

Man what a let down this nice novel has become

People keep forgetting that it’ s free and honestly the quality rivals some or dare i say 80% of paid works out there .. thank you author for your hard work just know that you have some hard core fans who really appreciate you

Jacob green is a seahawks hall of fame football player and also a defenseman idk if it’s a coincidence or not but a great addition nonetheless

This novel is really devolving into something s*itty

You have a good thing going author why the bull*hit milking of stuff .. but thank you anyway for the work as infuriating as it is

All the waiting for this nonsense

I hope after all your build-up and the soul-burning pace you have provided us that she is over and done with to never be mentioned again .. thank you for the effort

No need to name dropping just say all

The longest thought ever ..

Why so much filler my friend ? the last 4 chapters could be managed in one, you are treating this like a rubber band you keep on stretching .Thank you anyway

This depressing and mopy attitude is killing the novel and killing me with it ..

As much as i like the plot please author stop dragging the waller villain arc it’s done enough for the character development but it’s just my personal opinion, thank you for the effort author

Thank you Author for the effort but you milking it a bit much its beginning to feel like a highschool drama

So much nonsense im not even mad

Milking it till it dries and everybody dies

A lot of sighing and taking breaths going on

Complete trash !!

Chill bro