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raw?

Thanks for the chapter! There are some repeated paragraphs and wrong names. Jamei is indecisive but thats good for character development. Maybie Lexie will ground him.

so when the events of the London has Fallen eventually comes, he has a safehouse in London that he can also use.

Damn. I thought this would be the chapter about the surgery, then you hit us with the plane case, and now this cliff? cmon!!

you mean Elite right?

the romance is good, well written and not forced.. but maybe dont focus too much on it now. pacing the romance will be good, i think.

1st thing that comes to mind really. And its great.

is this supposed to be Bangira? cmon, you're translating.. Tyranitar makes a Tyranitar Sound.

Nicely done. Thanks for the chapter.