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It's a great story with compelling storytelling, but some parts just seem random. Especially the alien recruitment scene. Ed literally should not have had enough time to do intergalactic politics or relief aid while building his organization. The time frame is too short and Ed’s life is on a timer. Other than that the story flows well,
This is a little sus
1, but later Hades learned enough alchemy to betray his partner right after creating the philosopher's stone. Hades has no starting point and would have ignorantly damaged his body if he learned about it himself like how Edward and his brother. If you decide to leave it as it is I would recommend that Hades has some kind of lasting injury during his study of Ren's alchemy notes like a mechanical arm/leg that is not affected by Hades' own philosopher stone. It would give Hades motivation to seek Ren to reverse his ailment.
That's why you need the crafter class