… “I won't try and bore you with an enticing synopsis, just read this and give me money so I can stop being poor and you can stop being bored” … Yeah, well … I’m afraid if you can’t even be bothered spending a few seconds to promote your work, or give even a single sentence to give readers some idea what you are writing about, or translating, you will most certainly remain without readers … and poor. I get you are trying to be clever, but that’s not the way it works.

… utter garbage … yeah, that pretty much covers it. The mc gets killed because he dares masturbate … in his private room … after an apocalypse … because a “shy” girl broke into his room and was embarrassed (not sure how a shy, innocent girl could exist in an apocalypse, but ok … ) … the mc is such a pussy he is immediately begging forgiveness … and all that is just the first chapter. For gods sake.

You don’t even have to read a word to know you’re better off giving it a pass. The Winter Soldier as the cover for a Walking Dead story … the sheer laziness shows the author just doesn’t give a crap.

“Little Mischievous Mary” … I usually hate how names never translate correctly, or even consistently, but I can’t help but get a kick out of this one. Even if it gives a really false impression of Rogue.

You know, almost every Chinese author I’ve read seems to believe most Americans just stand around waiting for a chance to call some poor Chinese immigrant “yellow boy”, or “yellow monkey” or something. I know they exist, but I quite literally have never known anyone in my entire life who was that racist toward any other group. It’s interesting they think the US is that bad.

We read a chapter ago about how bored Vision has been the last couple months … here is something that would vastly increase his power, ability, and versatility, and he doesn’t want to dedicate any of his otherwise free time to it? Wow. The laziest robot ever.

… well, I suppose we should just ignore how this completely ignores the reality of human nature so we can enjoy the story …

Yeah, this makes no sense at all. The Vision that the author has created would absolutely not be doing this. He absolutely would not face Kang right now because a stranger wanted him to. He would absolutely not risk being away from earth for years or even decades right now. It’s always incredibly annoying when an author makes their character do something entirely against their nature just to force a plot arc.

What happened to his 10% regen/min?

So, his wis and int have gone up massively. Why has it not affected his mana?

He is literally the strongest man on earth … ever … and he wants to make money from local wrestling? Ffs … I see the obligatory single digit IQ of protagonist MC’s is on strong display here.

… cusp of the world? What has he been smoking? That serum does nothing more than make him the very weakest of the “powered” in the world. In many ways it’s far more dangerous than being a normal human.

Wasn’t he just thinking how he would have to perfectly pretend to be “Kyle”? Asking frantically about strangers, and about what year it is, is most certainly not normal. He needs to chill a bit.

Huh? Charles is scared to death of Draul for being “beyond omega” level, while Magneto looks down on him for being “merely” alpha level? Bit of a gap there. Which is it?

… wrinkled and calloused hands? And the first chapter had him talking as if he was about to die of old age at any minute. But he’s 40 years old. The author has to be a teenager. It’s the only explanation for considering 40 a washed up, wrinkled prune who can only wait for death. How depressing.

Well, interesting way of looking at it. Just gonna point out that it’s also a really lousy way of looking at it if you hope to make money from your writing. If it’s just for your own enjoyment, whatever floats your boat … but I’d still suggest rewriting and separating the really bad chapters into their own volume or something. It could give a good view of your presumed growth as a writer.

It’s not a warp drive. It’s neither warp, nor a drive.

It’s not a warp drive. It’s neither warp, nor a drive.

It’s not a warp drive. It’s neither warp, nor a drive.

…wow. So, several paragraphs of describing a “warp drive” that is obviously some kind of wormhole drive instead, except for the quantum particle collisions part not making any sense. Now we realize it was supposed to be transporter tech … and the quantum particle collisions still make no sense, seeing as that is absolutely the last thing you want to happen near a transport. And the limiting factor is not power, it’s computing and scanning power. For gods sake, there’s no excuse for this kind of mistake when a 10 second google search will help get it right.