Doing rituals during puberty, while he's turning into a elf, seems stupid to me. At the very least he should wait a year for his tranformation to be over before doing it.

Audino did nothing wrong!

"The elixir needed to be administered twice a day. Since it was already evening, using only half the dosage in a day wasn't optimal." That doesn't make any sense. 2 doses a day = 1 dose every 12 hours. Even if he applied the dose in the evening, the second dose would have been the one in the morning. It's not like if you don't use 2 doses before midnight the effect will disappear.

To be honest, a slice of life novel without a system about a pokemon day care would have been awesome.

The most annoying thing about this novel is the name of the system Just call it system ffs.

When I started reading this thread I was upset, then I got confused, after that I was happy and laughing, but now it's just sad...

If this is one the best book you've ever read, I feel sorry for you. Even on webnovel where 97% of all stories are crap, there's still a lot of better ones than this one.

Too much boring game nonsense, not enough cats.

If Shiki, Kaido and\or Big Mom hurt someone he cares about in the future, it would be 100% on him. He said he was angry when he saw the destruction on Skypia, I wonder what he expected to happen.

I feel like Rob could have done something more to protect Skypia and it's people, at least against the initial 'gold rush'. It's not like it was a surprise for him that pirates would try to invade. Maybe they just haven't appeared yet but having the s class hunters there would have been a start.

That's some strong bs, he can sense the whole planet yet he accidently saw someone taking a bath, and she saw him too.

Why is he such in a hurry to increase his strength? He can already one shot the planet easily. If he manage to learn instant transmission he could go to the Ototsuki or wtv they're called and casually kill all of them.

This fanfic always felt chinese, but the last few chapters made it impossible to ignore.

I saw to many I's in this chapter, I don't think I'll continue reading this if it stays like this. I don't know if the novel is good or bad but I don't like the many I's.

I hope it's not anothet canon rehash...

Somehow a lot of people know that the last movie filmed like that was 30 years ago. I think 5 people mentioned it by now.

"Just chillaxing like a baller'' I wish he died at birth.

You think being an smartass is being witty? lol

I think the only times we knew for sure of his cultivation level was after the system cleansing, and after he ate the great marrow cleansing pill.

It's like he enjoys looking in the eyes of immensely powerful being, even after knowing that they really do stares back through time and space...