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I wonder if all those women procreate by mitosis since that world has no males in it.

Went back to reading this for some reason. Author has reached a new level of man-hate in the latest chapter i read. Imagine if this novel/author was this absurdly, blatantly sexist against women as they are against men. Honestly think this author needs mental help. Forget the retarded powers all females have in this novel, after being apart for a long time MC didn't even say "Hi" to his father before he went to his mother's dead lesbian lover's grave so they can cry over her tragic death 20+ years ago. This HAS to be shitposting.

Author mixing up cause and effect

Interesting novel that is simultaneously horribly bad and quite interesting. The core idea is interesting and the pace of development quite rapid. The novel is engaging and despite all its weaknesses i've read more than 1k chapters at this point and will continue to read. That being said, here is an short list of SOME major weaknesses: 1. Horrifically bad writing/editing that reaches the level of pig English at times. Forget about grammar, sentence structure, correct word usage... half the time you will have only the vaguest idea what the author wants to say and need to rewrite whole passages in your head to make it legible. 2. Author and MC are extreme white knights. Every woman in the novel is hyper powerful, hyper beautiful and every time they speak their voice is like angelic chorus caressing the MC's soul. Thats almost a quote btw. Yeah. Males barely exist in this novel and if there are any they are either forgettable side characters or loathsome villain bastards. Its not obvious at the start but this gets increasingly clearer with the novel's progression. 3. Power structure is an endless climb with new hyper powerful mega elite never before heard of levels being created every 50 chapters. MC is also getting earth shattering unique opportunities to advance every 50 chapters but despite that all his girlfriends are always as powerful or more powerful than him btw. As i said, novel is objectively horrible on many levels but like nicotine, just can't seem to kick it so far.

OMG, did his balls just drop?

Uneven, but generally interesting. Took me a couple of attempts to get past the first chapter as it more graphic than i usually enjoy. Sex does play a large role after as MC is a 15 year old horn dog after all but it not too horrible. I'm at chapter 253 at the moment and the one thing that has been turning me off is the rabid Chinese nationalism. Its standard for these novels and i don't really mind it as long as it stays in the background. Its normal for people to be proud of their country and heritage, nothing wrong with that. But at times this novel feels like there were CCP censors standing behind the writer while he was writing it. The "China number 1!" feeling is a pity since at the start the story presents one of the few multi-ethnic and multi-cultural societies seen in such novels. Starting to look more and more like the novel is turning into a missed opportunity but will keep reading it as there is potential buried under the bullshit.

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Exciting! Can't wait to see which way you take this :)

Love your story and I hope you keep writing it! Gambare! Also, everyone needs time off from time to time. Better to take a week or two off every 2-3 months rather than having to disappear for close to a year. Better for you, better for the story, better for the readers. Lastly, just a piece of advise - something I see a lot of authors do is time their chapter releases to happen when webnovel refreshes for a new day and readers have stones etc to give Lots of authors/stories get a popularity leg up by doing so.

There were multiple loli before and there will be multiple loli after. The audience is, indeed, pleased