Eggrollz

I feel like the writing style is very fragmented the grammar is all over the place… but the story is good just needs word on sentence structure….

I feel like the writing style is very fragmented the grammar is all over the place… but the story is good just needs word on sentence structure….

I keep hearing air drop or planes during the story… you do know planes weren’t invented until 1903

I keep hearing air drop or planes during the story… you do know planes weren’t invented until 1903

It was great until like 60-80chapter where author gave up on translations. He mixes up his own characters and dragon names. He has different kings starting from chapter 84 from which he started with. Purple dragon was called belaerys then Vhagar idk the author is inconsistent. If he fixed this it would be a great novel but so far after 84 gave up… wtf is a demon dragon???

Garbage… dude kept putting Chinese names for a lot of people when it’s a Japanese manga… it just sounds weird as f***… so I stopped reading.. plus the mic sounds like an arrogant a**hole…. Idk why Chinese webnovels writers always thinks arrogant people make good MCs but I’ll give u a 1 for effort….

The main problem I have with this book is the names… who is Shire… why can’t you even keep the name of the main character the same as what you started with? The MC’s name keeps switching between shire and Charles wtf… the early chapter there also Wei gang some Chinese name for Weygard but he author fixed it in later chapters…..

Great novel! This novel is one of the rare ones with an accurate timeline and it isn’t all messed up. I’ve seen novels with people not doing basic research on the basic timeline.. so far no errors..

Great story just like his other works.. please release more advanced chaps… I’m blind so I use reader for all my stories, I’ve notice that this authors chapters are extremely short… most people’s novels average around 5-7 minutes of reading time but this authors chapter are only 2-3 minutes long which is super short of half what other authors post ….this is how I judge books so don’t take offense… overall great but way too short I’ll just wait until 50 chaps before I start because so far it’s already 8 chaps but if u add all chaps together u might get 10minutes of reading time…

Great story… but the author chapter are too short like most his works… give us some advance chaps on Patreon… I’m blind so I use voice to text… most chaps only last 2-3 mins while other people stories last 5-7 mins… idk how other people judge stories but the story is excellent but chaps are way too short so I’ll wait till maybe 50 chaps before I start.