The beginning is great but the middle chunk when after he makes his body and goes after the ice elemental’s is horrendous to get through if a slog fest from there in with just enough intrigue that been built up for you try and push through but from chapter 17 it’s been a slog to get through it’s still interesting but I’m at chapter 30 and it feels like read like 5 time as much as the first 18 chapters with less than half the satisfaction of the beginning 18.

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the story is great so far can't wait to see how it progresses in the future

The first three chapters have me excited about what is to come, I can't wait for more releases.

love it so far the last chapter had me really hype cant wait for more

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+1 yes

I'm so glad a new update came hopefully they keep coming really looking forward to where the story is headed.

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This is really good so far and I'm really looking forward to seeing where the story goes, I can't wait for more chapters.

really looking forward to more chapters realy glad I found and scp related story that actual has me wondering were its going.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

I'm deleting this review and making a new one so no sees it and misunderstand and end up not reading because of a mistake I made

It's really good the description threw me off, so I've been putting it off put now I wish I had started reading it sooner. ------hahaha, I was trying to day description, but I spelt it so wrong google auto corrected it to discrimination. I just checked my notifications and saw your message, that when I did a double take on what I wrote. I was thinking wtf are you guys talking about when I read your reply until I reread my review. (I delete my old review, and this is and update one, so people won't look at the old one and miss understand because of my typo)

hahaha, I was trying to day description but i spelt it so wrong google auto corrected it to discrimination. i just checked my notifications and saw your message, that when I did a double take on what I wrote. I was thinking wtf are you guys talking about when I read your reply until I reread my review.

This is honestly the only mushoku tensei fanfic I even bothered to read I didn't even bother to watch the anime only read part of the novel a few years back and drop it. I can honestly say that this has more interested than anything else and has me hooked in way the manga, anime and even the novel never had. I really hope the author keeps going looking forward to more chapters.

Has lot of potential and with the development so far it fells like it's goning be a long story looking forward to it.

This is great this is the what has me the most hype about new updates. Its the first thing I check for when I go into my library to check for new updates.

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