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  • Davix9520
    Davix95207mth
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    This is one of the best murim novel. Adventure, comedy, sect development. The plot is well thought, despite having a lot of chapters, the author kept the plot right, not off tracked unlike many others works. The main characters' designs are great too, each have a distinct personality. Easy to recognize and remember. For those who wants to support the real translator, here's his patreon link: https://www.patreon.com/MyLasted

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  • Davix9520
    Davix95207mth
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    That's how his life ended. The End.

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  • Davix9520
    Davix95207mth
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    Oh right he was still freeloading here...

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  • Davix9520
    Davix95207mth
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    That's a knack he must have if he wants to stab people with his mouth...

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    Davix95207mth
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  • Davix9520
    Davix95207mth
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    So good.*cry*

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  • Davix9520
    Davix95207mth
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    Finally got news from him!

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  • Davix9520
    Davix95207mth
    Commented

    Love this kind of chapter :P

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  • Davix9520
    Davix95207mth
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    Imo, this is better to use Palace instead of clan for some powers. Clan and family are basically the same. But the structure of the palaces is obviously different from clans. For example North Sea Ice Palace and its Palace Lord. Palace Lords does rule their territory but at the end they are still different from a true king. Sect, Clan and Palace. This is better to keep them different to easily differentiate them since each have a different system. Just sharing my thoughts. Thanks for the chapters!

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  • Davix9520
    Davix95201yr
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    Why it sounds as if Zhao Zidan will attack the clan before his death? If this is his dying will, i doubt the two others patriarchs will prevent it...

    Zhao Zidan did not have many years left to live.
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    Ancestor Above
    Eastern · Er Muqi
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  • Davix9520
    Davix95201yr
    Commented

    If it was me i'll also have someone to stay near the door in case i need to give some instructions. So i won't have to waste 1 karma point...

    "Your injuries have not fully healed," Lu Qing said. "Get Chaohe and Mingchao to lead the team."
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    Ancestor Above
    Eastern · Er Muqi
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  • Davix9520
    Davix95201yr
    Commented

    So he was still alive back then...

    "Mother reached the limits of her Core Lifespan and passed away five years after you closed yourself in…"
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    Ancestor Above
    Eastern · Er Muqi
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  • Davix9520
    Davix95201yr
    Commented

    Wonder how much clan members they have before the war...

    However, the Lu Clan lost the battle. Even though Zhao Zidan had not stepped in on account of his status as a patriarch of the sect, the Lu Clan could not defeat the powerful Zhao Clan.
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    Eastern · Er Muqi
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  • Davix9520
    Davix95201yr
    Commented

    'Game' huh...

    "This…I can't play this game blindly… If I played this game poorly, I would be harming my sons and grandsons. I might even cause my lineage to die out."
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    Eastern · Er Muqi
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  • Davix9520
    Davix95201yr
    Replied to Spabsta

    Just a local powerhouse. Imagine a little local street gang. Surely it will make a world difference apart from the international ones but for local natives ones they are like tyrants.

    From the start, he had faced many dangers, though he had always averted the crises without much trouble. He came together with his cultivation spouse when he was nearly 200 years old and birthed nine children in a span of several dozen years. During the next hundred years, the Lu Clan had occupied the spirit vein of Yuyan Mountain and prospered under his protection as a Golden Core Patriarch.
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    Eastern · Er Muqi
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  • Davix9520
    Davix95201yr
    Commented

    The greatest issues will still remain though! The conflict between the concubines, the inheritance and such!

    Her matter-of-fact tone amazed Qin Yi. Apparently in these ancient times, women found polygamy the natural state of marriage, which would make this place a paradise for some men.
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    Seeking the Dao in the Seemingly Mundane Mortal World
    Eastern · Ji Cha
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  • Davix9520
    Davix95201yr
    Commented

    Maybe because that golden world is always eating good stuff that's why he despises disgusting stuffs like those fragments so maybe Shuhang's inner world is always eating low grade stuffs that's why it doesn't mind and maybe consider those fragment as high grade stuffs.. (lol)

    Ch 1923 I do like seeing you vexed like this
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    Cultivation Chat Group
    Urban · Legend of the Paladin
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  • Davix9520
    Davix95201yr
    Replied to Davix9520

    And also...wow how fast enemies are popping out! This is even faster than your usual xianxia tropes. Basically an enemy every 1-2 chapters...

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    I Transmigrated As A Prison Guard And Suppressed The Princess
    Eastern · Little Bai Takes Flight
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  • Davix9520
    Davix95201yr
    Posted

    Would be great if the word 'evolution' is switched to 'cultivation'. I think the translator isn't used to the terms used by the translators. Beside that, so far it's okay. Don't know for later though.

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    I Transmigrated As A Prison Guard And Suppressed The Princess
    Eastern · Little Bai Takes Flight
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  • Davix9520
    Davix95201yr
    Commented

    I think Holy Son of the Heavenly Demon Sect sound better :P

    Little Zhou looked around furtively and whispered, "It seems that he is the Sacred Progeny of the Sky Devil Sect."
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    I Transmigrated As A Prison Guard And Suppressed The Princess
    Eastern · Little Bai Takes Flight
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