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Treywhitmer22hCommentedWell that’s disappointing, when you can easily solve this problem and spare your sister from having to marry a Frey.
I had all been an act though, even if I was in the body of a 10-year-old, Tywin wasn't the typical 10-year-old. Even with the emotions he was feeling, he probably would not have handled the situation by throwing a tantrum. He was angry that his family was being taken advantage by House Frey. Together with all the others who were taking advantage of their weaken state. His father being the reason, caused by his poor leadership. This was trivial to me however; this was already part of the story as I remembered. I already had a general idea of how things would play out. The only thing that I needed to be concerned of was how my actions would affect the chain of events.- Treywhitmer22hCommented
Just have Emmon Frey secretly killed
As I sifted through Tywin's memories, I tried to pin down any clues as to what happened to the original Tywin that I was now inhabiting his body. I was coming up with a blank, it was as if he just went to sleep so angry last night and then I woke up in his place this morning. There had been nothing, the switch had just happened and I was now here as if I had always belonged here. This was the work of a truly unfathomable being. - Treywhitmer23hCommented
The legends about the Long Night in Yi Ti explain that a descendant of God-on-Earth known as the Amethyst Empress was usurped and murdered by her own brother, an event known as the Blood Betrayal. This caused the Maiden-Made-of-Light to turn away from humanity in shame, and the Lion of Night came forth in all his wrath to punish mankind's wickedness, inflicting the cold and darkness of the Long Night.
I will give you your chance. I want you to fuck up that stupid "Great Other" who serves the will of that dumb lion. You can do anything else you want in between and after your task is complete. Don't worry, there is no penalty for being good or evil. Only how others will perceive you. I will shield your soul for you. Unless you find religion then any of the Divinities will be able to perceive the changes to you. Remember if you attract their attention and fuck up my little prank, I will make you suffer. - Treywhitmer1dCommented
So what realm is nascent soul supposed to be? Because in ATG it’s the second mortal realm, which is pretty weak.
The Great Rain Empire was the overlord of the Great Rain Continent, it was far larger than the Great Wind Continent. The strongest expert on the continent was a level 10 Nascent soul, there was only just one such expert. - Treywhitmer2dCommented
Was the first wizarding war not with Gellert Grindlewald?
Ryan closed his eyes as he rested his head on the bench. Countless thoughts assaulted his brain as he cursed the bad luck that followed him from his past life to this one and was still messing with him. He wanted to be reborn in the era of Harry Potter, but instead, he ended up in 1971 during the First Wizarding War, which means Voldemort is alive and kicking, and killing all kinds of muggles and muggle-borns. - Treywhitmer3dCommented
They forgot about him and his deeds after only a year? Who would believe that?
A year had passed since Narzug was last seen. Some of the older Orcs still remembered his deeds, but even they could not recall all the details. They spoke of Narzug's incredible strength and his nearly indomitable nature, but his exact heroic deeds were lost in a veil of mist and time. - Treywhitmer3dCommented
I think you flipped the roles here
Charlotte Katakuri suddenly smiled sadly, "Brulee, you have to know that in this world where the weak prey on the strong, the weak...is the original sin!!!" - Treywhitmer3dCommented
That’s a big time skip
As King Viserys Targaryen sat solemnly at the head of the Small Council table in the year 112 AC, his thoughts were consumed by the tragic events of the past few days—the devastating loss of his beloved wife, Queen Aemma, and their newborn child, Prince Baelon. The weight of grief hung heavy upon his shoulders as he struggled to come to terms with the profound loss that had befallen his family. - Treywhitmer4dCommented
Wouldn’t the king and his party notice a canal suddenly showing up when it wasn’t there on their way to winterfell.
Next, there was the issue of maintaining a consistent water flow. The canal needed to be deep and wide enough to accommodate ships and barges, but also shallow and gentle enough to prevent flooding and erosion. Harry and Dany's magic could regulate the water levels and control the flow, but it required constant vigilance and adjustment to ensure stability. - Treywhitmer4dCommented
And again with the so called detailed character descriptions in every paragraph…
With a fierce determination burning in her heart, Daenerys sets her plan into motion, prepared to risk everything for the chance to be reunited with Harry and to forge a new destiny by his side. With her resolve firm and her determination steeling her nerves, Daenerys sets her sights on the locked room where Magister Ilyrio Mopatis hoards his wealth. She knows that the gold within could provide her with the means to finance her escape and start a new life with Harry in Winterfell. - Treywhitmer4dCommented
You need to stop with the determined, defiance, resolute , and challenges o come and going to face. You’ve wrote it so many times over and over and with many different characters. All these so called detailed descriptions repeatedly gets annoying and just ruin the story. Other than that overall not bad even though I’ve read similar.
Yet, amidst the darkness, Daenerys also remembers the flicker of defiance that burned within her, the determination to resist her captors and defy their attempts to break her spirit. She remembers the fleeting moments of courage and defiance, the small victories won in the face of overwhelming odds. - Treywhitmer6dCommented
I think talking has been far passed, you already know he broke quite a few laws already. Just arrest him already.
Oh yes. This was definitely something she was going to have a very intense talk with Dumbledore over. Mean well he might, but his ability to do well appeared highly suspect at best. If he'd had the faintest idea of what this boy had gone through and had allowed it to happen… Amelia gritted her teeth, but sat listening, while pondering just how many people she was going to have to do something unpleasant to before her task was done. - Treywhitmer6dCommented
Shouldn’t he be sending all the excess chakra to the seal on his head for storage?
And something needs to be done about this, because I don't plan to stop at the level of an average jonin, even despite the difficulties with control. Maybe use seals? Draining or suppressing ones, like those applied to criminals? Of course, slightly modified. - Treywhitmer7dCommented
I think baa-Chan, aunty or granny or something like that
"Sure thing!" the boy nodded in agreement, flashing a dazzling smile, and Senju couldn't help but return it. "Um... Excuse me, both-chan, are you Senju?" - Treywhitmer8dCommented
So this is Hakudo?
Captain level White Hits! - Treywhitmer8dCommented
2500 isn’t big at all. He would have the least amount of troops, even the lake-town militia had more than that.
After a week of hard work, the forge was filled with weapons and armor. Narzug looked at his work with pride. He had created enough equipment to arm an army of 2,500 orcs. Now it was time to mobilize his warriors and prepare them for the impending war. - Treywhitmer12dCommented
How would venom and Batman work out at all considering that venom would likely want to eat people and Batman would never allow it ever.
Chapter 1: Becoming Venom - Treywhitmer12dCommented
What orcs? Aren’t they all goblins down there?
"Tragar, take me back to my forge and wait outside until I come out," commanded Narzug, issuing his first orders as the new chief of the Misty Mountain orcs. - Treywhitmer14dCommented
Well I would say uchiha temperment is cold and calculating with simmering anger while uzumaki are more ferocious and wild temperment.
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Gotta say that this song really matched very well while I read this. Good job!
As Aemon finished the song, the ancient, magical atmosphere that had enveloped them dissipated, but the transformation was complete. Then it dawned on him: both Rhaenyra and Aemon were now, officially, dragon riders.