Let us dive right in. It is a kingdom-building/shounen novel centered around a main character with the ability to extract. He develops his own territory in another dimension, while also tending to private matters in his own world. This is definitely an interesting read that will pique your intetest. Why? Imagination. 5/5 Stars This right here is your core strength. You are able to create a very interesting world with a well fleshed out power system with a growing power not to overpowered for the MCs current scenarios. It feels like we are still only seeing a small part of the universe and it will be interesting to see how it develops. Use of resources 4/5 The character to his luck has a lot of resources and they do not come easy either. You take the resources into account and I love that you sometimes find ways to fish up abilities/items that have been previously forgotten. Now, the problem with the amount of resources the MC has is that it probably gets hard to keep track off and if you put in x amount of chapters for y resource and then dont use it too much, then that would feel like wasted chapters for some. In my subjective opinion, it feels like the MC is juggling so many different kinds of resources that it gets hard to keep up. Money, splurge, money, splurge. But how much does it do for the territory? It would be nice to have some comparison to how Mc measures up in territory building compared to other people in his tier. Fights 4/5 I tend to read in a more detailed manner most of the times when the Mc is fighting in an important battle. It is actually interesting to see different strategies and how you use his techniques differently. What brings it down from a 5 to a 4 are the sometimes not too interesting farming fights where MC fights no name opponents. Here id recommend fluffing the content down, because I personally tend to just read between the lines. There is one instance when 2 no name knights i wont ever remember spend 1 chapter fighting it out. In my opinion, itd be better to say start the chapter with the end of the fight and then meaningful story content. Side Characters: 4/5 The side characters are properly fleshed out and they have their own personalities and reasoning. I was pleasently surprised by this novel when the 1d dimensional villain characters in the start became 2d and evolved with the story. It was a really fresh take and I loved it. What brings this down is what brings every other novel of this genre down. I usually have some rules when I pick a novel. If the MC is male, Id like the majority of his friends/associates to be male and the opposite for females. Why? I mean look at real life, how often do you see a man surrounded by 10 girls who doesnt have any dudes to sit down with. Vice verse with ladies. It goes outside the norm when a male is too saturated with ladies and kinds of makes it harder to form a meaningful romance later. Too many people fighting to be with the MC. Fits well for a fantasy, less so for a more realistic novel. I guess it depends on what u are aiming for. I also go by another thumb rule. I compre how the MC reacts to something a girl did vs boy. Lets say someone threatens the Mc and girl becomes lover while boy dies, it kinda pushes me off. Thats just me tho. Plot armor 3/5: At the start of the novel, the mc barely had any plot armor and it was even more exciting following his journey because of the near posibility of actual consequences like characters dying e.t.c. It feels like too many characters have plot armors keeping them from dying. I mean, youd imagine that one of his friends would die during 1 war or two. The MC had no names die who were allies to him but didnt feel like he learned much of a lesson. If the objective is a shounen novel, then keep going by all means, but if it is more of a realistic novel then give me some delicious cliff hangers and real consequences. Overall, a very good novel that Id recommend to anyone who asked. I like the plot line and the way things are going, but the fluff could be reduced and I am excited to see more of a realistic view of things. Please give it a try! You will love it. Chapter 500-600.

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Doesnt make sense in my opinion. Erin was wIlling to go through a fire trial to become a numbered agent and then she just decides to throw it away? I also hope to see layla get investigated for her disappearance feels like a huge organization like pure should have some methods to hack into the database of the mIlitary if even logan can. I love the powers and the development of this novel and the general plot directions, i just feel like we havent seen a very smart antagonist so far.