maybe make every chapter up until he reenters the void between worlds was a dream of what could be as he was still running from that monster in the 1st chapter and his real body finally got away so now a higher being shows up and the whole story can flow how every you want all the while greatly weaking his power gain if you want a long fanfic or greatly speeding up the flow of events if you want the op mc to act in many cannon or au events but do not know how to extend events outside of the few short years most stories last in timeline no matter how many chapters the story has

this is the largest flaw i have ever seen in a combo chain based power if it needs physical/mystical attack chains due to how easy it would be for nep to forget she did something and just do it again if it worked the first time...now the only real question to ask is the mental attacks from her actions count as part of a combo if so then this flaw becomes the greatest perk with this 4th wall breaking monster..

Great talent repeated

depends really if the hate is bloodline induced due to being a hunter (like in fate/stay night nanaya shiki just passed by the true ancestor and had the uncontrollable urge to kill her).. or it could be due to memories shown while alucard was teaching him (since no backstory on the training has been shown really so how the teaching goes is unknown) or even just seeing some vamp killing someone he knew as nothing more then food could have made him hate them . might even a mix of all the above.

ahh well it seems things are going down hill on this story seeing how he is acting like one of the wolfs who imprinted while at the same time is losing all sense of self to this bond (what little sense of self 4 chapters gave but still).. 4 elements is not op there is a vampire that can use 4 elements as well not to mention he is slower and physically weaker than a vamp and still has all the human weaknesses so that he would be hard pressed to kill more than 1 vamp at a time in a fight unless they group up and he can blasted them with high temp fire.

High School of the Dead first then go to Soul Land. this is for the simple reason you want to change the fate of soul land he would need to really see the darkness of man that could be found in a might makes right world and what better place to see the grand filth then an zombie apocalypse (it would also give him needed leadership in regards to ruling people since right now he is just running a company not running a country even if it is a company with high influence in the world he is not making the laws just helping change what is already there)

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Most like me do not comment before 30 some chapters or interesting events happen..others do not even try new novels/fics unless they have a large amount of chapters..as for how the story was going it seems interesting but not much has happened to tell if it will be good/ great or bad enough to drop from the reading list. since it is the start of the story that is painted like well thought out outline far I would have eventually commented or rated but since you are dropping then this can now be deemed trash until you resume the story .

October is the 8th month June is the 6th month..so unless the year is different he is older

Mix of both since that would just make her very possessive but also let you turn it down as they get together

venus or oshun if you are going to use the name to bless the ship more since both of these goddess could bless the crew the best

they are not short the middle has been cut so you are forced to go and pay for it otherwise you will not understand the story anymore so all these chapter post since author went paywall have became worthless since they are nothing but teasers

while wish type reincarnation is not bad the constant use of instant mastery ruins all stories since it basically goes you took 1 step now you can walk even if your body is too weak to really walk.. you swing a stick now you are a master swordsman but your body does not have the instincts nor muscles needed so good luck not breaking your body since you are trying to use master level swordsmanship with a beginners body...and the list goes on and on while killing the story since now the mc will never learn make errors in any skills since try and doing it once and now instant mastery auto makes you a master thus unless the mc is forced to be several times weaker than any enemy and in great need of body training to use the 'mastery' he will just steam roll all combat due to high mastery letting he attack from all the flaws he sees in his opponents ..while outside of combat instant mastery can make mc a master of all theory and other study type knowledge thus letting any 'instant mastery' mc correct anyone in any field since hey i picked up the basic knowledge now i know everything about it better than you who studied for years so let me tell you what your doing wrong since i can but plz remember my plot armor means you will not be able to kill me even if you try since i just got to learn a new skill if i ever get in a pinch and even if i can not kill you now i can run then kill you latter .... if you must give accelerated learning or instinctive corrective movements such will still need training will actually give plot [training time in which the mc actually studies and trains how to do stuff which if they self study can be told by a master that they trained wrong for combat thus giving even more plot devices that "instant mastery" kills while can also let mc have things he can not do well or at all thus giving him flaws making them more real as well as flat mc that kill stories faster then poorly made system fics]

It kind of kills stories when the mc can world travel on their own power since they would not have a body from that world (so they should not be able to use any power system of that world since the bodies they had use a completely different system) unless they are stronger than the world laws (or strong enough to force their current body to remake itself into a body of that world and hope it is not a world whose society keeps track of who is born since) I can never see how the laws of the world let the invaders enter and not treat them like viruses as they would bring energy and laws of different worlds (unless higher beings protect them even 'summoned' people get their bodies altered to use the energies in the new world)..just look at the butterfly effect on seer visions the mc has just using her knowledge of events it can be seen that if she really does not let Harry complete the prophesy (even if just the killing blow) it would not get completed due to fate and should backlash on her if she tries as that is my interpretation of Luna saying the Triwizard events are important.

but if he goes with the reincarnation theme then at some point the mc will have to be born male unless he makes it so that the mc get to the point they can force pick what gender they want to be born as. while nothing against the mc remaining female but since the mc is in a constant state of being reborn the mc has a 50% chance of being born male at least so long as it is not an AU with futa or the mc does not learn how to control their gender to the point they can change the gender they where born as. so personally i want to see the drama from the mc being born male and the harem reaction when they are female or when the harem is male the mc is female while still not attracted to men (if he is taking the harem in rebirth they should have new bodies and thus a chance to gender change as well) or even when they are all born men or just some of them are

No the girl has been almost raised by him it is just wrong besides the massive age gap

well staying until everyone ages and dies (or gets killed by a villain) would work best if you want to write him with more maturity (since you can even have him be a father if he stays that long) but if you still want him to be as he currently is then leaving the world soon is needed but he should have some consequence for messing up the timeline start showing up such as natural disasters or just start collapsing the timeline (or some other sht that makes him lose all contact with his lovers unless you bring them with him)

guns are a poor pick for this world unless he is making mana bullets he would be wasting lots of high grade crafting material since even hobgoblins need 2 bullets in rapid fire .. not to mention you sent him here to learn to harness his natural linage gifts so having him focus so much on wasteful items like guns and bullets makes no sense at all while he has a large amount of knowledge on different combat styles so he should be working on training them not getting stuck in a crafting montage which is why he was reprimand in the first place ... as it is i thought runes would not work in this world since he was sent here to harness his Evan gifts as a hunter not to be a magic crafter who goes for the easy way with guns that grow stronger as he keeps remaking them

Ok what is with this chap besides the skills that seem to fit mind and soul stat over body a whole life just was glossed over and then he gets sent to author know where world as a fresh vamp.

Akamatsuverse would meet a lot of points to let him grow stronger and fight with strong people.. at the same time he can learn lots of stuff depending on the when you have him show up or if you have him age slowly you can have him learn for a long time many different magics and natural sciences that can help him plus with meeting the right people he could study and make himself a nice self contained living space that he can move his island to while making many training/experiment places so he can continue he past studies without worry of others finding him [or use it to hide]