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thelastgrim

thelastgrim

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2017-11-03 JoinedGlobal
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    thelastgrim3yr
    Replied to Comalol

    How would that even work? The MC is only a genin for like half a year. And the main point of the Chunin exams, Its a TEAM exam. Raven is alone. Only at the end is it individual.

    Ch 33 Chapter 33: until the Chunin exams
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    thelastgrim3yr
    Replied to Ryo_Kami

    I found the same problem. But it's written in the wiki from naruto that the handle was made to detach. So the blade you can just recreate over and over. Just have a blacksmith create a new handle. I've only had Raven two swords because he wants the original. And to find out if it was possible to duplicate the sword. Then I had the thought to use the last broken pieces to have him get a ninja sword, that can repair itself and later use chakra with it. np. for the comment. I like the good comments ;p

    Ch 31 Chapter 31: getting back.
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    thelastgrim3yr
    Replied to KoRSito

    nice ;p

    Ch 28 Chapter 28: The last missions (part 1)
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    thelastgrim3yr
    Replied to LewisLeo

    It seems you're misinterpreting the dialogue. The disrespecting is more the familiar character trait of the Uzumaki. DON'T TALK ABOUT THE HAIR.

    "Hey, I can't help it ok! It just got this way, ok! leave it at that."
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    thelastgrim3yr
    Replied to eternal_flame

    I'm using it.

    Ch 4 Chapter 4: meeting with the Hokage (part 1)
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    thelastgrim3yr
    Replied to GunGod

    Can still happen. Haven't decided yet.

    Ch 23 Chapter 23: few missions
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    thelastgrim3yr
    Replied to DaoistEFB

    I changed it. He perfected the technique. thanks for the comment.

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    thelastgrim3yr
    Replied to Dollar

    I don't really care if they give me a bad review. If they don't like it, like hell that I care. This is something I'm trying to do for fun. nothing else. The only thing I listen to is some mistakes I've made in the story. I really thank you for your praise. don't know if I deserve it yet. but thanks.

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    thelastgrim3yr
    Replied to Jebz

    He hasn't been described yet, it will come.

    Ch 11 Chapter 11: Meeting team Guy
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    thelastgrim3yr
    Replied to Mysteryon

    You're correct I was wrong. I'll change it in the chapter. thanks for the feedback.

    Ch 10 Chapter 10: A History lesson
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    thelastgrim3yr
    Replied to AzureShades

    You're correct I was wrong. I'll change it in the chapter. thanks for the feedback.

    'Never thought that someone would find those books I left in the library. Hihi. was my small payback against the council. how could they make the village forget about my wives clan, or about Kushina and everything the Uzumaki's done for Konoha. I hope with this Naruto feels more connected with Konoha as he is the last of our forgotten ally.'
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    thelastgrim3yr
    Replied to freezeZero

    You're correct I was wrong. I'll change it in the chapter. thanks for the feedback.

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    thelastgrim3yr
    Posted

    really a good story, too bad you decided you going to drop it. I'm also a fan of your next work. maybe, you can take this novel back up, when the others are complete.

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    thelastgrim3yr
    Replied to DrDken76

    yes, he is. But at some point, even Rock Lee and Neji were in the same class as Naruto. but couldn't find the reason how they got to a class higher. so I tried to make it so when so excel in the class you could get to a higher class.

    "ROCK LEE!!!"
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