Thanks for the Chapter!

Also the scene with Hermione, the ability to just vibe in the presence of an extrovert is one of my favorite introvert skills.

Thanks for the Chapter! Ever since Lucas/Harry removed Voldemort he’s been doing so much better at acting like a real person and planning ahead. This scene with Dumbledore? *chefs kiss* See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter! Looking forward to seeing how Ah Yin reacts to all of this! See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter! Lucas is so good here. All of the pre-emptive action is very good to see. See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter! The MC has a ship now? I like where this is going! See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter! I’m really enjoying what you’ve got here author! See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter!

Thanks for the Chapter! I’m really liking what you’re doing here author! See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter! That last line was nice. See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter!

Thanks for the Chapter! It’s so good to see all of the training pay off here. See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter!

Thanks for the Chapter! Reading about all of the thought you’ve put into this to make the world more coherent is great. Seeing the author’s notes is fun. I also totally agree with your point about the laws. It’s been a while since I read the og!novel but there being basic and then advanced laws only was weird to me. See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter! This isn’t boring at all author-san! I’m enjoying basically everything here. All the OP-ness seems like it is going to be hard to top though. See you in the next one.

Thanks for the Chapter!

5 stars for the algorithm. TL;DR Read this. It is a shining gem of douluo dalu fanfics even with just what is here now. I'm going to skip discussing my scoring here because there is something more important to talk about. The MC isn't an idiot and his powers have not been nerfed by the Author. The first time I read through the couple of chapters that described him getting all of his abilities and then using his training cards to acquire 100 years of training that actually meant something I was so excited it felt like I had a fever. His powers have all the supporting powers that make them work in a different universe and the Author is respectful to the original powers/power system and the powers/power system of douluo dalu. Giving an SI a bunch of cheats and then working them into the actual story in a coherent manner that doesn't feel boring is an amazing achievement that I am more than willing to congratulate the Author for. We are definitely still in the honeymoon period and will have to see what the update speed and stability looks like from here, but this is the sort of fanfiction that makes all searching for it feel worth it.

Thanks for the Chapter! I really enjoy what you’re doing with the setting. It is awesome. I can’t wait to see more DanielxCarol stuff! See you in the next one.

5 stars for the algorithm! This is another Yggdrasil fanfic that is shaping up to be different. I really enjoy where the author has decided to take the story and I especially like the focus on character development. I hope to see more character dynamics and the eventual battle between the two guilds. It is still relatively early in the story so I’m pretty hyped for more stuff happening in the Yggdrasil game arc. Also, props for having the courage to genderbend momonga. A well done genderbend to include the original mc in the harem is always *chefs kiss*. TL;DR The story is off to a great start with a focus on characters over rpg elements. The author is cooking up a great AU.

Thanks for the Chapter! Rest in peace Toriyama-Sensei. See you in the next one.