thomasoien

think this is better edited so that's a plus, I stopped reading the other version at like chapter 30

this already exists with 696 chapters under the name "Life Through the American TV Show World"

so how did måneskin a band formed in 2016 with a song from 2021 come to be in this AU earth 2015?

it reads like he is pretty far on the spectrum or missing most of his emotions completely.

kinda strange that there has been no talks about super villains before this chapter and then boom they are all at the kingpin-hand meeting. feels a bit jarring.

i for sure though the ice cream man being named Percy Jackson was foreshadowing her having a god Father and it coming into play later in the story and forgot about the dyslexia problem😅

i thought you would mix in Percy Jackson lore with her being a half Blood explaining why her mother hated her/ father left and she would have some type of awakening that unlock her memories😅

wrong novel

seems like you mixed up the words enchanted and enhanced.

this sounds unbelievable with the density difference between iron and gold.