Shadowbark
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Shadowbark2yrCommentedNot even safe from the endless loading screen in a magic world
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A choice between a giant wolf and a princess who is a dragon? Gah! Rip out my heart why don’t ya!
{I want you guys to choose who helps Cera in his divine mana aura quest. The choices are between Fenrir of course, and the other is Nelli, the first born of the dragon king Vendris. I'll tally the votes when I start writing the chapters for the divine mana aura quest. Thanks for reading!} - Shadowbark2yrCommented
Honestly id rather you finish one before the start of another. Chapter releases tend to slow down when there are multiple stories to tell due to lack of time or authors burning out
{I've been playing with another idea for a story and I want to know if anyone would want to see another story by me while I write this one.} - Shadowbark2yrCommented
He is probably heading there to. Use the word too instead, it means also.
Relomal sighs at my question and takes off his monocle to clean it. "This is how things are for now princess Annabella. If I went out there at the start of the fight, then I would have shamed the city of Zeder and its nobles further. Now that some of their own have died in combat and I didn't have to step in because of failure they will have less of a punishment. The situation now is I have stepped in because of loss of soldiers, not failure. They won't suffer to much for this. As for the young man, I don't know who he was, only that his name is Slayer Zern. From what captain Kursco told me he is very talented and skilled. We might even see him in Glendar, he is probably heading there to." I never got to personally thank Zern. If I do see him again I'll be sure to express my gratitude. The rules that have been implemented have changed our country. I only hope big brother can make a difference like he always said he would. - Shadowbark2yrCommented
Staring instead of starring
As Cera goes to sleep and rests for the night in preparation for the remaining distance of his journey tomorrow, the people of the caravan are talking about the young Slayer Zern that saved them. The one informing all these people is Kursco James, he is telling the events that had happened right in front of him. "When he showed up there was a slight worry in the back of my mind when I saw him. After a few seconds of starring I watched him dismember and systematically kill them all. It only took a few seconds for him to get rid of the whole group." I tell the merchants and settlers the tale as I recall it. Everyone is taking shifts on watch. Its my turn right now and my nerves are on edge. - Shadowbark2yrCommented
I have things to do and places to be. the word too should not be used in there
I see another head look out from behind the butler and its a woman in her early 20's, she has long straight blond hair and green eye's. She is pretty, but I am not some desperate guy that falls head over heels for someone. I have things too do and places too be. She looks at me kind of funny and has a slightly rose colored face. I look the same as I do in real life, I am one on the more attractive side. Both my parents are beautiful people and I am to since I am their son. I continue to walk forward and begin to lightly run like before now that I am out of view from the caravan. I look at my stats for the information on my exp gains. - Shadowbark2yrCommented
And he is more on edge
He rubs his head and leans back in his chair. He isn't the type to look like this. His mindset could be compromised and risk this entire battle. "We need your head in the game if we are to win this. Other guild alliances are set up other places. We only got the best spot since we got here first." Dark Blade looks at me in mind frustration. I touched a nerve and now he seems to be even more in edge. Instead of dragging this on I make my way out of my tent and go speak to my commanders. We also play a role in this battle just like everyone else, and I'll be damned if I am the reason it fails. - Shadowbark2yrCommented
Mild instead of mind
He rubs his head and leans back in his chair. He isn't the type to look like this. His mindset could be compromised and risk this entire battle. "We need your head in the game if we are to win this. Other guild alliances are set up other places. We only got the best spot since we got here first." Dark Blade looks at me in mind frustration. I touched a nerve and now he seems to be even more in edge. Instead of dragging this on I make my way out of my tent and go speak to my commanders. We also play a role in this battle just like everyone else, and I'll be damned if I am the reason it fails. - Shadowbark3yrCommentedCh 231 Chapter 231
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Thought Alfred was the one to be stopped?
They entered the room and Arthur found a teleportation circle with a staff standing there. They planned to enter the fortress alone and try to stop Tyrin, although they had a very small chance of succeeding. - Shadowbark3yrCommentedCh 115 One More (1)
- Shadowbark3yrCommentedCh 50 A Domineering Sacred King
- Shadowbark3yrCommentedCh 1 Prologue: Who asked for the 'Very Easy' Mode…?