for a. ook about breeding dragons. there really isn't much focus in them. doesn't name the majority or let them out much

right. the dude can't even control his strength how does he know it was 10%

this twist is awesome. do t know if he is bad or good

I hope this whole paragraph repeat stops. waste of stones

I feel like black is out of place. rune would be more appropriate based on previous ranks

is there a reason his level is not shown? only his job levels are listed

I need a b class weapon. pythons corpse gives birth to weapon

I really wanted to like this book. but the constant grammatical errors and changes terms throughout is horrible. keeps swapping between he/she for pets servants and slaves awful

i feel like the story is all over the place

should edit chapters before releasing drop in quality is rough

Keep changing the race of the bea….

Glass cannon personified

Thank you for the grammar

So go Back and fix it