Surorer

"Thanks for the constructive criticism. I’ll try to improve. I’ll revise the chapter 'The Doom' a bit later to better incorporate it."

okay, thanks i search for counterparts

i hope und see it now

ah okay i see, i try again

The map was way too big (in terms of MBs), so I had to split it up in this weird way.

thx

Hmm... it’s for the flow of the story and gives him a reason to interfere at certain points in time. And I think that’s something I would do too—or at least, I hope so. Even if it seems a bit hypocritical