Wulfie

No no wah author sama! I just meant that style of descriptions felt repetitive. I don’t have anything to suggest in terms of how to change, but I’m just asking if you can change it up. I am personally into action oriented and not a Harlem fan. I am making my way through the story. Xoxo the way it is right now. It feels a little bit that he’s training for the sake of training. It doesn’t give any real drive to the story or character building…. This is just my 5cent this is just my opinion… xoxo you lots!

I appreciate your novel but the way he levels up has been pretty consistent. Struggle level up within the same chapter why not just skip and say with his struggles he improved instead of constantly showing oh his struggling….

The bunny needs to die…

These kind of chapters are fine, but you need more logic behind it so he’s broke right now trying to save his sister get his previously spending time with this spoiled person that has no lovable qualities about them at all

If you want a daily filler this is a great read unfortunately the author seemly lost interest and the ending was rushed. While it is no cliff hanger many of the side plots were left incomplete, author had skillfully left various minor plots to build the world but they were left in activated. Kinder he tells us this is a special place and the story ends with us knowing it is a special place nothing further is done. It is a HEA ending I read this through while it was free so I couldn’t in good conscience suggest purchasing. It’s a good read nonetheless…

I like dad lol

Hi edit suggestion “Don’t be a Disappointment”

Where’s the empire?

I enjoy this development as it kinder slice of life country building. Which is my genre

Thanks for the invite but a read more BL