Give me a break! He does want anyone to know because he would lose all respect from his army for screwing the wife of one of his own men.

Meh...............................................................................................................................................................................

You have low standards

Lame! The whole secret identify plot twist has been done to death by countless light novel authors.

I could easily see Arbane kill his newborn baby brother as revenge before fleeing.

The author knows he screwed up by making the MC a hypocrite and now I he's trying to conveniently fix the situation.

“What? What are you talking about, Yu Shun? Why would I take Luo Lan from you? Do you think I am that low?” He was not angry; he was just in utter disbelief - I can't believe he can say that with a straight face after impregnating the Eleven Queen.

Is the MC an idiot? When Jörmungandr went all in he should have folded if all he had was a pair of 2's!

As I said If its just business and not personal then their so called friendship is irrelevant to the decision. He no longer needs Grey so he should treat him like everyone else.

The Naomi dying arc was extremely forced and a poor setup to try and create drama for the sequel book. Its almost as bad as the SMG turning bad arc.

It's called bad storytelling.

There numerous books out there that are that are very similar to what you have written.. You're just getting your feelings hurt because someone called you out for being arrogant enough to to claim you're somehow revolutionizing MMORPG novels. If you can't handle negative comments then your in the wrong business. Not everyone is going to try and inflate your ego. Then again you seem to do a good enough job of that by yourself.

What exactly is revolutionary here? There are numerous books out there with the exact same setup. Re: Evolution Online has basically have the same premise.

Why would anyone want read a book about an idiot MC? Max was a crappy character in book one so why would anyone care about following his story now?

This soap opera level writing is pathetic

This storytelling here is absolutely terrible. Almost as bad as the SMG plot that came out of nowhere.

You have low standards

What a dumb plot

We'll see. If he continues screwing the wife of one of his generals then he's still a hypocritical POS!

Finally realizing he is a hypocritical POS lol