i hope this isnt done but then again most of the different but good ones get dropped i know this is a complicated story to write being stargate/harry potter but this is one of only maybe 3 good stargate stories and none of them are very long or have finished

you gave him gold like the sun now give him white or silver like the moon balance and all that as for his clones specters is good cause in mass effect there are good and bad ones they get the job done how they see fit and if he teuly wants balance that will be for the best

this is a good story. Unfortunately, it seems the translator doesn't read comments starting at 520. The chapters start to be in the wrong order or are skipped and haven't been fixed in over a week

great story i much better translation than others of the same novel but starting at 520 some of the chapters skip or are outright the wrong chapter

wrong chapter

its a great read but you seem to skip a chapter after 240

i get what you're saying, but if it was you, could you honestly ignore it and continue with your writing Authorsbwhonactually care about their works can easily be blocked by stress, and even if they aren't blocked, they can not write at the same level anymore, making it less likely that they enjoy their own story

id give it a higher rating but the first 18 chapters cant be read

i beleive 2 is good but an occasional does of comedy never hurt anyone

has this been dropped?

again, the ror is on the seventh floor. I just want to let people know i really enjoy the story, but this stuff can easily be found with a simple internet search. It's just reallyvanoying to me, but other than that, this is a great novel so far

although i like this story, you should at least get the basics of Harry Potter right. The ror is on the seventh floor, and fluffy was on the third floor

i don't know everything the author has planned, but after livestock and crop problems are solved, if you have enough water or a source of water nearby, some bases fish farming should be considered as well not to mention besides normal livstock consider things such as rabbits and snakes as long as it can be raised it should be used not to mention the parts from these animals that can be used to produce other things such as snakeskin boots gloves or packs and rabbit fur for warmer clothes

single and it would be good because to many authors go harem also you can do much better character developement with a single love also the first love or crush doesn't have to be the one he ends up with after all booth in comics and real life how often does that happen but up to you iuts your story and jf you feel you can write harem better then dowhat make writng enjoyable to you after all it would suck to have another dropped story because readers can't stop infuriating the author

this is food but he seems to be become the god that killed him

i dont know where you want to take this but it would be cool if he actually got Luther on his side to fom a teem of heroes and had the abilit to get legal perisson from the governent or somerhing to ise lethal force on enimies that have caused to mch damage and or loss of life and only then will he and his team kill so that altgough the league aill hate they cant do anything about it and it could i fact become criminal to interfere when given the go ahead i write my own story along those lines but my thinking ends up way to scientific so my writing ends up boring

shino has been cloned liba is nowhere lol

yes but maybe hes a cousin or brother voldy hasn't killed off the gaunts yet

he couldve gotten regret ones he faced the empress no need for needless betrayal

why does he have to keep getting betrayed its annoying hes already suffered enough novels like this irk me constant betrayal is annoying especially when the mc doesnt deserve it