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Acheritte

Acheritte

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2017-04-20 JoinedGlobal
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  • Acheritte
    Acheritte2yr
    Commented

    Here's Johnny!

    "Who's there?"
    altalt
    The Oracle Paths
    Sci-fi · Arkinslize
    detail
  • Acheritte
    Acheritte3yr
    Replied to Belg4r

    the attachment of villin towards professor crumb felt a tad too forcefull, i felt like you rushed it. I mean he was around him for less than a month and there was not enough development in that aspect which made me feel like it was too superficial. Also villin mentioned earlier that he would not participate in the would be retaliation toward decorus as he already made his contribution to the academy but when the attack was called he didn't mention it. there were a few other thing to be honest but i don't remember ( goldfish memory here :p ) Anyway good job and with this standard it's perfect.

    Ch 155 Chapter 155: Healing
    altalt
    Tales of the Legendary Magus
    Fantasy · Belg4r
    detail
  • Acheritte
    Acheritte3yr
    Commented

    while some of the early story made me want to drop it the recent development made it so worthwhile and to be more precise the two last chapter are really good. Thx for the chap and i really regret that i can't binge anymore.

    Ch 155 Chapter 155: Healing
    altalt
    Tales of the Legendary Magus
    Fantasy · Belg4r
    detail
  • Acheritte
    Acheritte3yr
    Commented

    Villin be like : Do you know how I got these scars ?

    Ch 149 Chapter 149: The True Experiment
    altalt
    Tales of the Legendary Magus
    Fantasy · Belg4r
    detail