That's so stupid. A challenge incredibly specific which happens to exactly coincide with the situation so as to involve the protagonist :/ Unless that was written after the MC decided not to participate, it's terrible writing :(

" So it's a real world? And the monsters I killed...? " Long Chen asked as he gazed at Xun " They were real as well! " She smiled as she said, shocking Long Chen :/ Xun clearly told him that it wasn't a dream world, the author keeps forgetting stuff

"I would've had trouble with this before, but not anymore. I literally have a flying sword,"" I mean... you also have wings but the author just forgot lol

So... what happened to the whole "the ring will guide you when you are near the orb"? The first 200 chapters didn't have any obvious plot holes than I can recall but I can think of 3 in the last 50... This is getting annoying.

Ah so that was the moment of regret. Thanks Giving it a quick re read, I'm not getting the feeling that Ri was regretting being with him though. Maybe I'm still misunderstanding something or maybe it's related to that but Ri expressed her regret about that later

"Dyon distinctly remembered a time where Ri regretted choosing him." Mmm there was another chapter that referenced this but for the life of me I can't recall this happenning. What is this referring it to? I'll mirrow this on WN and Moonquill cause I don't know if you check both

Whatever happened to his hesitation to kill humans? lol

I'm amazed at all the hate

So... how did she know he has blonde hair? Lol Did I miss something or it a plot hole?

I know this was supposed to be comedic, instead it just felt really stupid. Oh well, not every joke will land for everybody

"I won't tell you because I don't want to lie to you since you are family" 2 chapters later... smh

Would you be so understanding if the servant helped in trying to kill you? lol

This author makes quite a few mistakes but this isn't one. Long Chen has Long Tian's memories, he would know this stuff

Long Tian, the author just had a bit of a brain fart this chapter :P He also confused them earlier on in the chapter

Author you are confusing the name of the MC. The guy that came from Earth is called Long Chen and the guy from the cultivator world is called Long Tian. His soul seed looks like Long Tian and not Long Chen. A small but annoying mistake

Well then, guess that's it. Enjoyed the novel even thought it's not the best written. Too bad this happened, bullsh*t plot developments where a heroin gets separated from the MC are at the top of the "annoying sh*t that makes me drop novels" list. If you ever read this author, I'm not sh*tting on the novel. Just thought that this was a really poor way to create conflict and it's really cliched and spoiler warning it seems it doesn't get resolved soon either. Just grates my nerves. Shame cause I was enjoying the novel *sigh* Have a nice day Spoiler Warning, looking deeper it seems this doesn't get resolved for a loooong time, so really poor choice. Don't wanna hate but way to ruin the novel for me :(

And I was enjoying myself... well half tempted to drop this novel right now but I'll give it a couple more chapters. I hate these type of stupid plot developments where a heroine gets possessed or whatever.

This mini arc was good until that ending. "Wait I didn't do that" punch and that's it? All it took to defeat his heart demon? Should've been some more struggle at the end, maybe being confused "did I do that?" while trying and failing to stop it and having some moment of clarity to break through it or something. Anything better than what actually happened. A punch and a "hah thought you could defeat me?" just away from this trial

What kind of jump is that? lol