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Why is he always not paying attention to thing in every chapter….

Tong is so annoying….why is she so high and mighty. She treats him like her slave.

So he’s going to do it with every girl he likes now…This wasn’t his character before. I thought he was just going to be with one girl. The story was starting out good. But looks like it’s going down hill from here. Let me guess he’s going to bang every girl he comes across from now on and just cheat on his high school sweetheart….just because he can.

Ok I’m done with this novel. This author must be a teenager who knows nothing of how the world works. Author keeps using the word “Apartment”. It is clearly a town house. A apartment is place you rent…Rolls-Royce are custom made cars! If you’re buying it from a lot, it means you are buying a used car….

There is no way a girl would be at the club by herself at night. They alway go with friends. The smart one anyway…The bouncer wouldn’t let anyone cut the line based on what you’re wearing, especially if you a guy. Unless your on VIP list.

Nobody questioned or explained where the money came from? Also banks can’t cover that much money on one account….In the US any deposit over a certain amount, the banks have to notify the IRS on it. The authors clearly doesn’t know how banks work, especially for large amounts and how banks manage it.

Where are the rest of the chapters at?

Where are the rest of the chapters at?

The two sisters are so annoying!

You should at least explain the time difference between worlds. Looks like when he sleeps in his world the cultivation world is still daylight?