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ExiledImmortal

ExiledImmortal

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It is very funny with these novels

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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Replied to Neferien

    Exactly.

    Ch 15 Chapter 15
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    Shadow Monarch: DxD
    Anime & Comics · ChaosOfDeity
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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Replied to ChaosCarnate

    Issei

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    Shadow Monarch: DxD
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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Commented

    You should apply a bit of technicality when using weapons, whether they are spears, swords or others. This way the variety of the combats will end up being greater, as well as its realism; in some parts, you end up being somewhat redundant due to the lack of this variability. Although this is just my opinion.

    Ch 145 Code breaker [4]
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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Commented

    Are there going to be more archetypes of protagonists?

    Ch 8 Accident?
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    Life of a Villain
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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Commented

    ... xd

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    Hero of Darkness
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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
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    Despite its very convenient events, it is an entertaining story with a detailed and constant handling of the growth of the force in its universe as well as logical fights that keep you glued to the screen and reading avidly. I must also mention the effort to show characters that evolve and not fly like bees around nectar and pollen, the latter being the protagonist. Also I would like to see a certain degree of rivalry with other characters, it's fun to see a protagonist that sweeps anyone but when that point becomes repetitive and the only thing left is a thought of When will a third order or higher being appear? Well, the latter hasn't happened yet and after all we are at the beginning of the story. Anyway good job and thank you.

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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Commented

    Fang shi*

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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Replied to EVILATIONS
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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Commented

    author there are any plans to confront the protagonist with system users, reincarnators or other skill users. It would be interesting to see a fight for the protagonist plus op hahaha.

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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Replied to ExiledImmortal

    But now, *

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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Commented

    But, now... Are punctuation marks or the complete sentence missing?

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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Commented

    that's... funny

    Sitting on my desk, I blew on the bangs of my hair. As I was doing so, from time to time, I would check my phone.
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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Commented

    silence

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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Commented

    in essence you are already saving the world by trying to maintain the plot.

    I wasn't someone who wanted to bear the responsibility of saving the world. That responsibility weighed heavier than anyone could possibly imagine.
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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Commented

    Are you writing for fun and giving yourself the possibility of the fanfic ending abruptly or do you plan to be consistent despite the mishaps? of course I don't say at the cost of everything hahaha.

    Ch 7 Future plan
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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Replied to ExiledImmortal

    sorry for the grammar.

    Ch 76 Homecoming [3]
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    Fantasy · Entrail_JI
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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Commented

    author don't overexert yourself given the possibility that the quality of your work may diminish, otherwise, if you are comfortable with it, keep up the good work. Keep up the steady and consistent development of the story you are forming; I have high hopes for what you will build.

    Ch 76 Homecoming [3]
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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Replied to ExiledImmortal

    sorry for the grammar.

    Ch 62 Resolve [1]
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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Commented

    This is probably one of my favorite chapters, not because of what happens but rather because of the way you constructed the chapter. Showing in evidence the problems of the protagonist and his solutions while creating a more vivid world. Although previously there were cases in which this was achieved, not in such a significant and natural way.

    Ch 62 Resolve [1]
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  • ExiledImmortal
    ExiledImmortal2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 55 Hollberg [1]
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