ExiledImmortal
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You should apply a bit of technicality when using weapons, whether they are spears, swords or others. This way the variety of the combats will end up being greater, as well as its realism; in some parts, you end up being somewhat redundant due to the lack of this variability. Although this is just my opinion.
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Despite its very convenient events, it is an entertaining story with a detailed and constant handling of the growth of the force in its universe as well as logical fights that keep you glued to the screen and reading avidly. I must also mention the effort to show characters that evolve and not fly like bees around nectar and pollen, the latter being the protagonist. Also I would like to see a certain degree of rivalry with other characters, it's fun to see a protagonist that sweeps anyone but when that point becomes repetitive and the only thing left is a thought of When will a third order or higher being appear? Well, the latter hasn't happened yet and after all we are at the beginning of the story. Anyway good job and thank you.
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author there are any plans to confront the protagonist with system users, reincarnators or other skill users. It would be interesting to see a fight for the protagonist plus op hahaha.
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in essence you are already saving the world by trying to maintain the plot.
author don't overexert yourself given the possibility that the quality of your work may diminish, otherwise, if you are comfortable with it, keep up the good work. Keep up the steady and consistent development of the story you are forming; I have high hopes for what you will build.
This is probably one of my favorite chapters, not because of what happens but rather because of the way you constructed the chapter. Showing in evidence the problems of the protagonist and his solutions while creating a more vivid world. Although previously there were cases in which this was achieved, not in such a significant and natural way.