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well I like to read and I can be kinda a nut on occasions
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fei wang reed Jerry has one word for you: Portals
MTL?
some one should put a phinias and ferb meme here with there song robot riot
he should go to the second world when the first is on sumer break between hogwarts school years
he is also important to the dragon warrior games as well as chrono triger and dragon quest games as he was behind a lot of the character designs for these game among other things
just as a teen
makes me think of guppy from the movie we can be hero's daughter of shark boy and lava girl
if you are going to get in trouble no matter what you do then you might as well make sure it is worth it to you for getting in trouble
Some one needs to put a HE-Man meme here
I am glad you left this I remember it from the first draft and yes it did become a joke lol
after all forges mutant power is tecnopath like
x-men's forge would also be pretty good
why not feed the temporal energies from the time slip to the realm as it happens for not only him self but the plants and stuff as well thus granting the realm its required time laws as well as solving the time slip issue of course he would still need to figure out how to displace the time slip affect from them to the realm
some one should put a prinny meme here
Although I like this version I have seen you make great progress as a writer as you did this one and as such I also saw you hitting more blocks as it went that in my opinion was do to how fast your writing level increased conflicting with your old level where for your old level of skill this story was great as an overpowered story but back then you where not trying for an overpowered story and as your skill level increased you subconsciously realized this and in trying to correct this away from an overpowered story it caused your new skill level to come into conflict with your old level thus causing the blocks there are two ways I see of solving this the first way is to do a rewrite with your new skill level the second is two stop trying to correct and instead make this an overpowered story and use your new skill level to make this an overpowered slice of life story since that it what categories it fits best with as well as a bit of romance and my own suggestion is to do both starting with the second option so as to wait till the rate at which your writing skill level increases slows down to avoid it happening a second time when you do the rewrite and once it dose slow down and stabilizes a bit then do the rewrite with you new improved skill level fallowing your original concept that might even rejuvenate your inspiration and once again allow you to improve in your skill further but a a more reasonable pace that will avoid this happening but also avoid you possibly having your skill level stagnating to much like some authors who lose sight of there original drive that made them good or even great authors to begin with.
she gave the hallow a death nuggie
dance puppet dance
pretty much not sure why or ho it helps I just find that it dose sometimes
the author Eins came up with an equation for this
and technically he did not create the genre it was already the he just re brought it to focus since I have as stated in my other comment found said type of genre from other cultures that date back more then a hundred years before he was even born