Absolutely Charming
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I commend you for improving your writing style. Compared to your previous fic, this is a major upgrade. The pacing is just right, the character interactions is great, and most of all, the plot progression is great. I just hope you don't overly meta this one. The thing that greatly ruined your previous naruto fanfic was because of that and the pacing. Great Work author.
You know, I was kinda disappointed in this arc. The reason for that? Wilhelms powers are not being explored as much as I hoped for. He literally became a jack of all trades, master of none. Sure,Wilhelm is powerful, but against someone who has mastered himself, he would never stand a chance. In this case, OG Issei can literally curb stomp Wilhelm with ease if a certain someone didn't interfere.
A perfect chapter
For some reason I don't know, this chapter felt lacking. I read this chapter multiple times and I still can't figure out why.
I call cap. Asians are famous for having a small pp
why must you leave us hanging like this, author? !
Maybe Akavili was a former Robinsons.
Nobody thought about this guy. Instead of exercise, he broke his figurines(?) instead.
Then stop making us attached to the female side characters. You've done a wonderful job at bringing them to life that we can't hope but root for them.