I have been reading this novel, and I have truly enjoyed it. It's has clear flowing dialogue and great character definition. I look forward to future releases.

he is already going to be op later on with training why bother add something non naruto related.

keep up the good work.👍

I am very much enjoying this book, I look forward to the future of this book and would like to thank you for releasing this.

hana inuzuka for a wild dog girlor karin Uzumaki

yes take his disiple as a wife as well he is going to need a lot of children anyway more the merier.

plz more

I hope he disbands the party in next chapter and leaves her behind.

love this start, looking forward to the progression 👍

hmm surely if he goes to konaha and meets minito who is identical this will raise all sorts of issues not to mention him with kushina when they meet minito, it's like hi meet minato a less impressive version of myself.

it's better he becomes jinjuriki as it is super weird that they have the new clan become the host of this new powerful weapon in the village. also just because he becomes a jinjuriki doesn't mean he is automatically strong. he can still forge he own strength as well.

don't pay attention to the trolls if people are reading your book and continue reading it's obviously good. Otherwise those people are idiots reading something they don't like.just keep up the great work 👍.

for other people's post hinata already has seen his eyes in a previous chapter maybe he took it off because of that?

this is a great story so far the pace is perfectly fine. some good old character development is great 👍

this was honestly a great starting chapter I can't wait to read more 👍👏

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This book so far has been a interesting read with great character development and easy to follow story line. I look forward to the future chapters and seeing how our main character will develop and how this fanfic generates its alternative naruto timeline. keep up the great work. 👍

is this a revamp of a previous book as I have read this intro before. if it's the same they are heading for a suna camp and blow it up.

hi author, good job so far. If I might say when you write out the chapters you should edit them for sentence structuring as it will make it much easier to read. Programs like Word / gramerly or chat gpt can help with this.

keep up the good work doing great so far 👍