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inazuka are the ninja dog clan aren't they? I thought they were terrible at genjutsu.

you may as well start again you could have started a new book from 3 chapters ago and nobody would know thus us the same book. very disappointing that you have completely abandoned the start of the book.

the names are all messed up

there is no such thing as all in in black Jack 🤣

hmm a tough choice this could fix his issue with having to constantly having kids but it should come with some kind of limit like can only be there for x amount of days. additionally cant bring anything too op back to naruto world but can learn new stuff etc.

the biggest inconsistency is chakra. There is no way e level chakra can make 5 shadow clones he shouldn't even be able to make 1.

loving this book so far look forward to next chapters 👍

I basically skipped this chapter.... I'm here for naruto related chapters....

the uchiha lived in the centre of the village and o ly moved after the 9 tails attack..

is this ment to be a fictional addition Tsnuade would know kushina was a jinjuriki as she was in the loop being that her grandmother was the first jinjuriki.