shashumga

I don't like how this story is developing. The premise of the story should focus on strengthening and solving the mystery around Nak, but instead, we are getting too much romance. It feels like the author is trying to mix romance, sci-fi, mana, and mystery, but they have added an excessive amount of romance, making the whole story tasteless.

Did your mom not teach you to not accept gifts from strangers?

'Fearsome Beasts rampaged everywhere and the lives of mankind were threatened.' I thought main character was going to fight with beasts in order to survive and eat them to get stronger. But author really ruined whole book by making it just clout chasing/face slapping main character. I still preserved and kept going for more thinking even if it's face slapping it's still the novel I was looking for this whole time but chapters are filled with illogical and needless face slapping/clout chasing I can't ignore so I can't keep going.

Lack of imagination leads to shallow writing quality and the author only cares about word count. The only good thing about this work is how easily it makes you sleep.

I've read up to chapter 70 but story is quite boring. Some of the character's feelings develops rather unreasonably, lack of mc figure, most of the chapters are development or fights of the side characters. Main character is seeking 'invincibility' but he is not even training, most of his time is spent on side characters. I'm going to keep reading a hundred more chapters but I don't think it's going to change anything.

Pros: - Book has moderate amount of chapters (Around 450-500) - Has good ending - No harem - Multiple Worlds - Repetitive but not boring because it has moderate amount of chapters - There are no annoying clans/sects/young masters - Author could drag but didn't and cut to chase to make story reasonable. Cons: - Fights are kinda lackluster - Comments of random side characters becomes repetitive

Well that's why military ranks exists. If general dies someone else can replace their position. Another 2 IQ cultivation novel.

ends at chapter 239

But half of the salary of an average person.

PROS: - Interactions with characters, - MC's personality changing slightly over the time, - Different take on dungeons, - Story progresses with stable pace. CONS: I couldn't find anything to nitpick, solid work.