tnx for the chapter, dont make it so dark and edgy at the start [img=recommend]

haha Headmaster, isnt he like a cleaner

i am not sure how to feel what he did with his emotions, couldnt he just lock them up somewhere in his mid, or used the key to process them. i think it was a little out of character what he did

hes such a bad friend to Tony, why not just leave if he got what he wanted from him. He doesnt do anything for Tony , he knows the future so why not tell him about the new element, or tell Tony about Natasha

thanks

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thanks fornthe chapter

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i like the idea you had for this work, the writing is good. Its too fast paced , you should add some more depth to your story, some stuff to fill in all the details. could be more descriptive of the use of his powers. i am looking forward to new chapters

You trying to brake the 4th wall?

i like magicians much better that dragon ball

Thanks, now i will start reading this [img=recommend]

thanks for the chapter, i have a feeling the next part will be interesting

omg hahahaha , so funny.

I cant really imagine Stiles with Alison. i like what you have written, looking forward to new chapters.

I always liked the idea of ben or in this case lex beeing a hero and a good mc, without the omnitrix but just with magic (anodite powers) and gwen with omnitrix is interesting too. I think there is much potential in this setting.

Dont see a problem with your book, dont mind other people because there is no point getting angry . I am waiting for more chapters.

I like this idea, if i had inventory i would do the same

the best would be Frankenstein, he is already a werewolf and has red eyes like vampire, he can get the human appearance hehe all from noblesse

i really like the idea of this story, its really well wrtten, easy to read, its such a wonderfull mix of different worlds and i am looking forward to new chapters