DaWey
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DaWey10mthCommentedsame as this one
"That's right! How can they fight halfway? Isn't it the same as writing a novel and end midway through the story?"- DaWey11mthCommentedInitially, Vainglory wanted to force his way in but hearing their question now, he paused for a while and instantly replied intelligently, "F*ck! You don't recognise me? I am him!"
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why censored?
The [Double Dragon Sky Killer Palm] was a 55 level skill by Air Benders. This move was the improved version of Air Bender's Ice Dragon Blast and Fire Dragon Blast, which required the use of inner power to blast both skills at the target. It carried the frozen effect as well as the burn effect and was considered the *****. - DaWey1yrCommented
Dayum~
The hooded figure tossed a gold and left together with the girl saying, " You can keep the carriage also . " a female voice could be heard. - DaWey1yrCommented
usage of past and present tenses is kinda confusing using " " can be use for saying words while ' ' can be use for thoughts
Seeing that, Captain Chao smiled and nodded back to Joey while thinking, " Everyone said that the 5th prince was a good for nothing trash pampered by her mother, and recently he almost died. But meeting him today, I thought that he was not so simple, unlike the rumor. This kid, having developed such calm, easy-going characters in his age, he might go further in his path of cultivation than us ." Captain Chao had a comfortable feeling from Joey. - DaWey1yrCommentedCh 10 CHAPTER 9 : Ready to leave the palace
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"Did''
" Sister Ai, do you give me something during my breakthrough? " Joey asked in a gentle voice. - DaWey1yrReplied to 9thtimer_
it might be an adrenaline rush .you wont have time to think the moment you see it
One day after school, a car hit him after saving an old man. "Am I going to die like this? " he thought. Then the old man suddenly hit his forehead with a strange stone. - DaWey1yrCommented
you should have use ' ' to indicate a change of POV or indicate who is saying what
Hmm? What's happening again? I felt something weird. I open my eyes and once again I feel shocked. How did my mother get younger wtf? And how did her breast reduce in size? I started making noises after I saw her but alas, what was heard was a baby crying or that's what my mother thought because I felt someone grabbing me and I once again look and find the familiar face of my mother. Oh, she's here. So who was the one who was just holding me? I try to move my face to look again but I cannot. It's a child's body that is only a few days old, it makes sense I guess. - DaWey1yrCommented
sounds like the author is the MC himself
This beautiful lady is for sure my mother, if not then I am fucked. Considering the loving gaze she's been giving me, she for sure is my mother. Yes, she is and you cannot deny otherwise. Please don't. I don't want more troubles. I already died once. I should stop overthinking and do what I need to. Drink milk from these beautiful nipples. I am a baby after all. - DaWey1yrCommented
what a way for an introduction
"@$##!" - DaWey1yrCommented
what a way for an introduction
"@$##!" - DaWey1yrCommented
what a way for an introduction
"@$##!" - DaWey1yrCommented
why i didnt get shock
What he saw when he passed the barrier was very shocking, it was a small entrance to some cave, but thinking about how the situation in which the barrier was, Liu Yang started to walk towards the entrance. - DaWey1yrCommented
asking all questions, then forgot it after the purification for rebirth eh
"It's all right" - DaWey1yrCommented
and now i'm back, already forgotten where i my last read was. started from WW
Make Your Choice, Youth - DaWey2yrCommentedCh 1 A Martial Artist’s Plight
- DaWey2yrCommentedCh 264 Devouring Dragon