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Yes. Unless author is going to continue GraeFoxx's work with permission since he has not updated in a long time, I think we should consider this a copy
It is a great idea to write on but the MCs personality needs to be more fleshed out from the first 5 chapters I read - as of now, she is coming across as a whiny brat always complaining about her parents even after getting reborn. Doesn't add up that she sent a copy of herself to make sure they are happy and also essence of War being so peaceful is sketchy. Just suggestions from my side - up to you if you want to take them up or not
Could not agree more - there is not enough love for this masterpiece of an anime/ lightnovel in the fanfic community so you have my full support, author. Just one question - is it a harem?
Take the neede time off, man. All the best for your future and as one of the fans of your writing, will be waiting eagerly for whenever you come back.
Completely agree with this. Start your Bleach project and maybe that will help you close this, though I am enjoying these chapters as well
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May, please
I would definitely go with May - she is experienced and MC, as an adult in his previous life, may prefer that to practice with before going after the virgins
I know you are the author and have the right to present your views throught writing but please buddy, no Kamala Khan - if you are adamant about keeping her please change her into an OC
Medusa in a fully submissive role to MC and Esdeath as a switch (fully submissive and quite masochistic towards MC but Sadistic Dominant personality towards others)