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make him a child of destiny. the ones that have the protagonist halo.
Great story, hopefully with the transfer he can truly shine with new tech.
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Odin could have also stop the fight
I believe you should not change the plot. Every great story has a moment that people don't like, but it is that moment that define the main character. Look at warlock of the magus world that story for me is one of the best ones about magic.