I love this it got whole game thrones thing going on where you don't know who to trust.i hope you are able keep working on this because this one best hp stories concepts I have read bar none.

read what you posted Don't ever be discouraged.just be your self is never wrong.to many try please everyone.you just tell your story.it your world you make it.if you piss people off **** them do not try please world just those enjoy your telling

for some reason my comments cut out.i was trying to thank him him for showing me a vision of of very attractive woman.i don't like that she did the pics.but I cannot deny that *** sells and money is power. beautiful women have power all there own and that girl has it spades

I did not know who she was.but all I can say thank you.you are not joking if the I say are you are talking about.nice taste in looks.

so your going keep the story going.cool it's good read so far