Is it a streotype when a chinese author does it.Come on imitating patented products and expecting no consequences is a clasical chinese streotype.

Goood

İts good but its short

Author doesnt think about things like thath i guess.Its just a bad story.

Author doesnt think about things like thath i guess.Its just a bad story.

Or he can just train a few magical mole and make a passage

Cant he just create some pockets of areas a few times bellow the castle and rest in them until his mana recover or just dont make a direct way to magic source and make a long way for just one person, i dont know it just feels wierd that a wizard cant reach to a place in a few weeks

So money is just a number in your story.Just think of how much is 5m gold just think.Just start counting number in your mind and count to 1000 and then you will realize how much is 5000000 is.

Tooooo much numbers of soldiers in the army breaks immersion.So skagos has 15k army then what about the whole north 100k?

Ahh another fem sasuke why people are changing genders of main characters i dont know

A fucked up timeline then.Reanimation jutsu was invented by second hokage but it was flawed and he stopped advancing it.Later orochimaru discovered it and perfected it.I cant just belive chinese authors i just cant they just use the orginal things made by kishimoto but never introduce new things never tell effects and couse of actions.

Whatttt all of a sudden a stupid mc out of nowhere.He just said its not a fanfic and does the exactly the same

Just let it go life is meaningful because of lost ones and limeted time spent with them think about it a dying parents coming back to life after everything they know changed and their child became an adult

It is a bad written chap

I think rules shouldnt break for sake of plot its bad writing if naruto doesnt have kyubi he doesnt have it thats all.breaking rules and fallowing canon shatters immersion and a insert character became meaningless

A complete pyscho and a maniac for the mc killing for sake of killing not for my taste good luck

İts going good you did kyubi bussines good bu please dont make a ageless pwer of nature a comedic relief

I always wonder what is the point of a fanfiction story if its still fallowsa the cannon events.Mc of this story did nothing meaninful after the uchiha massacred an event he also didnt involve.Its becoming boring for me.

Horibble

Telling its deepest secrets to a being hate humans and full of hate is never a good idea never and its not rational or reasonal