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Man, this is so unfair. But this is exactly how good dramas unfold. Dang it.
No no. Please don't make a harem by 'forcing' a character into it with convenient plot. Or at the very least, please don't make Alex into a doormat willing to say yes to more girls despite already having a girlfriend. There has to be a better way to introduce a harem than this (if that's actually what you're going for).
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Dude is on the same wavelength as me lol
You can't keep confirming our guesses like this XD --- But there is a solution to this conundrum - Release the next chapter before the right guess comment is made... An invalid solution right now but something for the future. Having a backlog before posting the cliffhanger helps :D
Let's be honest. I think many of us already knew that accusation would happen the moment we saw Benzou fail to keep his mouth shut. Only question now is if he'll be praised for his strategic thinking or criticized for harming Leaf interests. Considering that he was a genin who (supposedly) didn't know about the higher-up's plan to leech off that mine, I hope he isn't criticized too harshly. --- Thanks for the chapters!
You are of course allowed to have the heist go perfectly with only NEAR failure. The question is if you can make it entertaining and intense enough to have us on the edge of our seats. --- Thanks for the chapter.
Ah, the response I'd always wished someone would give to that jinx nonsense.
Author, are you OK? Why are you suddenly using rescue instead of purchase? Why is Counter Spell suddenly called Spell Lock?
It's smut. It was fine and enjoyable for over a hundred chapters. 5 star worthy even. And then the author starts to gaslight a believable romance into existence. And then a new girl is introduced in what is possibly the worst porn plot I've seen till now. Who the f*ck counts BJ head bobs in two decimal points of a second? That was when I quit this fic. I didn't even stay until that scene was over. I was too disgusted by the premise to continue further. The problem with having a good plot to go with smut is the expectation that the plot will remain good throughout it. But of course, that doesn't work because at some point, meaningful plot is discarded in favor of supposedly hotter smut. Apparently, things will get better in a future arc. Sadly, I don't have the patience for it. This would probably be more enjoyable if I had the ability to switch off my brain when bad plot shows up randomly. Again sadly, I don't. Well, it was fun while it lasted I guess.