Inn0cent_S0ul
Hey there, How you doing? I've joined WN for two years now, and I am trying to be a writer now rather than just a reader. And I hope you'll support my work by reading, commenting, and liking it.
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I won't comment on grammar, since mine is not that much better. I just noticed you didn't capitalize the first letter of the names in many places. The second was punctuation, you forgot it in quite a few dialogues. Well, I too do the last mistake sometimes, so, don't worry it's quite common. LoL. Overall you are doing good.
Overall a good read, I'll point out a few points which I really liked. Your writing style is very interesting and it makes people read more, it would be better if you can edit your chapters one more time before you upload. The plot is good and I genuinely felt bad for the things she went through and all up for the revenge part with the system. Good work Author!!
I love the romance genre but they can be pretty boring sometimes, but this story is a bit different. It keeps you engaged with a well-written plot and the ever changing story tone. The writer has done a fine job on the writing part and I am amazed at the level of description. I'm really looking forward to this story. Keep it up Author!
The main character is cute and funny, LoL. Ahem, her interaction with people are so funny to read. She does her part well and the others do the some. But the funny part comes next when they part their ways. The characters are well developed and plot is engaging. Well done Auther! I look forward to next update.