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Fair point on the distance. I actually didn’t catch what it was until you pointed it out. Thought our boy was being a long distant sniper. C’est la vie. Looking back he used Type 54 which indeed is a pistol and supports usually 9mm or .38 Super (7.62 phasing out).
Just a suggestion here author: ease up on the verbs and description. Take this sentence as an example (which has a period in it that probably was meant to be a comma—But even with that, its a run on sentence). Instead of describing every detail, and trying to draw parallels for the reader, try just mentioning her effect on other people. Let the reader’s imagination fill in the blank on the specifics. It’s been well established that she’s pretty 😊
Correction: F110 on full afterburn (max thrust). Thats same engine in F16 Jet. At least thats what wikipedia tells me (131 kN), and I bet that number is only seen in the lab 😏
From my back of the napkin math (986 kg * 147 meters per second = 144.9 kN), it was slightly more than the thrust of an F100 jet engine (130 kN) 😂
You = Author, not you Halloween… Sorry threading/replies suck on this platform
I’m nitpicking here (fictional story) but cell phones communicate to cell towers (ground stations). Ignoring that, let’s say these are sat phones, distance between two phones wouldn’t be the issue. Cell A => Sat => Base Station => Cell B, thats the (normal) communication path. But we can even say Cell A => Sat => Cell B if you want. Distance between Cell A and Cell B wouldn’t be the problem. It’s really distance between Cell to Sat. Does Cell (A or B) have a line of sight to Sat is real Q. With todays tech standards at least, a building or tree can disrupt that let alone “mana”. Think Satalite TV, a thubderstorm can disrupt that. Again, nitpicking here (overall good story, clearly, or I wouldn’t be commenting a few hundred chapters in 😂).
Generally bullets fly faster than speed of sound. So you’d hear the bang after the blood 😏
Logic breaks here. Any weapon you used that you didn’t create yourself wouldn’t get you soul power…. Which is most kills in this novel.
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Oh this is going to be good.
I’m laughing tears.
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