this novel is still fire , keep the chapters coming

thanks for the amazing story cant wait to read future works

ah I finally got some time to start reading again, this book is still amazing as ever keep it up, also I turned 22 today

just read the whole story and caught up I really enjoyed your book, the writing and progression of character and also the villains are amazing, you do have a few grammar mistakes here and there. But this story is just amazing keep it up

oh nice this is getting better and better

another amazing chapter, if I don't comment as often it's due to me being in college and I get busy , but this layer of multi scheming is interesting you get see how bad the internal struggle is

I said nooooo not notebook but autocorrect is sometimes the devil

you left on a cliff hanger notebook, thanks for the chapter

that is an amazing ability that will come in clutch , also thanks for the chapters

another 2 amazing chapters intrigued ,also why didn't she show her dad the water blades that the clan had lost along time ago

I really enjoy your story, there are alot of stories on this platform , that all do the same thing , time and time again so when I find stories that are different and are written well, where I can't figure out the next sequence of actions and don't make me feel like I'm losing brain cells and the characters are well written, then I enjoy that book. so that's what I mean when I say I enjoy your story keep up the amazing work

another amazing two chapter, I wonder what the artifact she lost was called

enjoying the book keep it up

hmm I need something creative to say, I got nothing kachow

Another two amazing chapters , enjoy the novel. Have a nice Day

another day another chapter, also I'm not too sure about the new system in terms of how it will affect reads who can't afford chapters and use power stone to get a free chapter

keep up the amazing work, I love this story

I finally caught up it took 20 bucks but the story so far is worth