Interesting story, you forgot to explain how his hands returned after they got cut off, and a couple more plot holes here and there, but it feels great to read, has a nice and steady pace to it, but remember, Don’t Sink into Cliches unless you have too! Good luck, take your time and can’t wait to read more!

Thank you! Thank you so much! You don’t know how much this brings me confidence to continue! I’m a new author and am having confidence issues in knowing where I stand with my readers as they don’t comment mostly to reply! I’ll try to hit three Chaps this week as a thank you!

Thank you, which part do you like? It's taking me forever to write it out because I keep getting inspiration from my research into the system that makes up the world of Naruto, as half the time it's Chakra good magic, wow! With most novels or even people bring Technology, Ki, or Magic into the world when I think it was already there, you just need to dig deep enough!

It’ll be explained in later chapters, but think Naruto equivalent of Cursed Spirits

Don’t worry, he will get there. I‘m just introducing the power system as well as how his powers will work in the early stages. From a more Fantastical setting to a Semi futuristic and primal society in the future chapters

Just six dollars? Man you underestimate the wages of delivery people

Thanks I'm trying to go for two a week, and I just postedd another chap.

Thanks for the comment, I'll fix that. Did you know that Naruto’s world is also called Earth? Even though its size is nearly 3 times ours?

I’m one who cried when ‘Lisa’ sang ‘Surface Pressure’

This one. It's remake of the story outline. and how do you feeel about the story so far?

Shameless author, I know but have to get the ball rolling.

What’s wrong? My first comment is so depressing!

Please comment I need to know how I’m doing

Basically these guys are giant chocobos breed by the clan members.

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Alls cool we just can’t wait to see how you will with the GOT power system in DC universe!

Thanks